This trash .

I got several problems cause you seriously don’t understand anything about the wizarding world and are just claiming them to be behind us in culture. For starters the pervell family is a fandom theory with no backing aside from a fucking cloak. But if you actually use the theory the pervells are the potters so no he doesn’t need a heir for them. Also when a family has died out with no apparent direct heirs they are absorbed by their closest relatives or broken apart and given to multiple families. As for the “Johnson” family you don’t need to make a oc house. The vibes do have a heir chase Susan bones is heir apparent cause women can inherit the lordship. In the end I just don’t get why you people enjoy making the oc the lord of multiple houses it’s unnecessary and over used.

It’s already proven that in Harry Potter universe magical beings don’t suffer any consequences from inbreeding. There are also families that have marriages outside of their respective country.

did anyone else imagine the phantomhive manor

It's wrong of me to pettily enjoy the Dursleys getting a taste of their own medicine...

Wow so even after having all these so called titles he can't bring dumbledor down so what's the point of giving him so many titles in this ff absolutely fucking nothing you didn't show him magically powerful just the titles and money yet he can't do anything about dumbledor so the purpose of this ff is absolutely fucking nothing one of the shittiest ff and fucking hippogriff shit writing

Thank you for wasting our time. Really appreciate it.

The premise is interesting, careful about logical error in your first chapters though :

-I don't see in what world James would be screamed at for saying he is ready to renounce being a almost a prince for the girl he love. "...he was going to use his bride-to-be very ill..." isn't english enough for me to understand your justification, also why call him a pig for wanting to be with her ?
-You picturing over the eyes is not really clear, I had to reread this part to be sure of the situation. You could have said 5 lines in one sentence easily. Also why hasn't he seen a photograph of both his parents in more than 10 years ?
-Being the "Brightest" of anything, as it was said about Hermione, has always been a simple excuse to put someone undeserving on a throne in a community limited to a single country. You cannot say "She is the brightest witch of her generation" seriously when you forget there are other countries you know nothing about, much less say "Brightest of THE age" where you encapsulate every generations around them. This is plain stupid, low level population thinking right there.
-If Harry has been raised with Neville all those years, how come he doesn't know of the Longbottom parents' fate ? Doesn't Neville go to visit them often ? What, was Harry not close of the family that everybody decided he didn't deserve to know ? And that's for the two kids that were discussing their parents in the first chapter.
-The point around Harry knowing or not knowing about Voldemort isn't clear, Gran immediately goes to calling him He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named, but Harry doesn't even question it ? That's like 'Harry Potter, first book Classics' of explanation that you did not give. You assume a kid wouldn't want to know the real name of the guy who killed his parents ? He did in other medias.

You have to be careful and think about each new story points you add in your story, because each time you put an element in exposition, you also risk missing links between other existing plot elements you already placed firmly in your story.
Same with basic grammar errors, you have simple software, online or not which can indicate when you do one. Use them, or a Beta Reader. You can only gain from it.

Good story, I hope you update it.

please continue the story

Thanks

I recently found this story, and really love it, are you continuing to update this one? If so I would be so happy, but I understand if the writers block is heavy. This is such a wonderful story!

Uh, they do all know Harry is lord black and what they all think means fuck and all right?

unless another oath was involved, why the hell didn't augusta train harry to be a lord before this?

I have just found this story for the first time. It looks very interesting so far.