Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next

This is an ok story but it’s too muggle.

I know you said you thought this was bad, but this was really good!
Your writing got better and more fluent as the story developed and you are a very talented writer. I really enjoyed this, and have also read the sequel and thoroughly enjoyed that too. I only hope you finish it because it was awesome

Okay, so I probably would have enjoyed a feel-bad-for-me story, but I can’t immerse myself in it since you have him acting so weirdly. Him saying he’s fine when clearly not is believable; acting happy when he’s clearly not, isn’t. His fear of needles is beyond ridiculous, that it’s so bad he starts shaking and that he actually admits to being afraid is even more so. I mean, look what this kid goes through regularly, and consider that he’s most likely never even HAD a needle or even had to think about them before, why would it scare him? More importantly, why would it scare him to that degree? Last is his reaction to the news he has leukaemia. Howling and sobbing, screaming that it’s unfair is so mind-numbingly far from how he would react. I can imagine him, once everyone leaves quietly sobbing and mumbling about how unfair it is. What made it worse was that there was no moment of silence as his confusion turned to shock, to despair. Literally as soon as she said it, he ‘howled’. That’s not even how a normal person would react, let alone Harry. The most he’d do around people is say “oh” and then close himself off completely until he was alone.

I wrote such a long comment to properly explain the bits that put me off and explain WHY in detail. Your Harry isn’t believable, so his suffering and his emotions aren’t believable. It makes me feel nothing.

Well this chapter seems to be a run on sentences

If the cup she looked at was the one Harry was reading for Ron than the Grim was actually going for Ron. Which was true afterall

Thanks for posting this story. I loved it. I didn't like the truth and dare games but other than that it was great. I always find Harry's third year hard to read because everyone initially thinks Sirius is guilty when he is not. :(

I really love, how you took the original story... And then made i different, but yet, quite familiar️Idk if you know what I mean, but, I really love it Love from a PotterHead in Denmark

"This is the most saddening yet heartwarming thing I've ever read!" said me after reading this the seventh time.
Y'know I always come back and visit this fic? It's a masterpiece.

imagine harry potter how he looks in the movie doing this.

From being unconscious to violent reaction from treatment to playing quidditch in two days No way unless you want to kill him.

Do you truly think mother hen Pomfrey would allow Harry to fly in weather like that? In fact, wouldn't someone be raising a protest over Wood working the team so hard when a key member has a possibly fatal illness? Where is Harry getting the strength to participate? One of the major symptoms is fatigue & weakness.

Leukemia is when the white blood cell count is too HIGH.

Little cheesy, no?

Why did they have to go to the Three Broomsticks to floo to the ministry, but were able to floo back to Remus' quarters?