Great job! Please update soon! You write really well and I expect this sort of things but I am a spelling geek and a few minor spelling corrections are there but that's alright. Good job!

Asami's pov

O.O Tahno! Make mako jealous! Please update!

awesome story

YES! Never thought I'd say this, but Tahno saves the day. I really hope that the connive connie together to mess with Mako's head. I liked him at the beginning of the show but once Asami came into play, I really hated his guts. It's not Asami's fault. I thought it'd be WAY more believable if both girls ended up with someone else and was left alone. Such a weeny he is. But I really like how things are going. Please update again soon. :)

It was very intriguing. If I were to choose a couple, I would most likely pick Tahno and Korra. Mako is, well, he's a dick. T

Oh my gosh. A cliffhanger and Tahno's interest in Korra. I feel so bad for Korra feeling so down because of Mako and all this confusion. He really needs to settle on where his heart is. I do hope Korra warms up to Tahno and they get closer. I hate seeing Korra this hurt especially that she was the one to save the Fire Ferrets. Can't wait to see what will happen next.

So, I've been meaning to stop by and see your stuff, just so much stuff going on... I the like the beginning so far. I think you've done a very good with the 1st person POV (I've never been able to get the hang of that). First chapter had a good flow to it. Will get come back to read more when I get a chance. keep it up! :)

This so good...but could you please put up two or three more chapters...I'm dying to know what's next

please continue i just love jealous mako.

Real nice story. I love jealous Mako and pervert Tahno. Whomever she ends up with will be cool for me. Please give the next chapter.

i really like it so far keep going! truthfully:)

I love this SO MUCH! :D

i LIKE Mako's POV, and damn that Tahno! By the way, I would love a point of view from Bolin (: UPDATE!

This is really good, and poor Korra