I loved it . You really write very nice stories . Please don't end up. I want read this story as what happens next . I like mia and jayden together. And also you are an amazing writer . Your imagination, your thoughts, your feelings, your ideas awesome .

Really like this story and don't end up with this .

I hope u write more it is really good.

What a womderful story it was really i love jayden and mia as a couple and now it even made me felt more in love with themamazing story

Love that story please let the sequel come

SO looking forward to that next story! This explains that whole river thing very well, by the way. I've always wondered why Jayden didn't tell the others about the mystically healing water.

please write the chapter as soon as possible

You should totaly do a sequal, I think you do exalent!

please put that jaden and mia would stay together. i have a good part for your next 20 chapter's what if after a few weeks after the fight and they won the battle and jaden is alive, what if that mia was pregnant but deker was still on the loose so everyone stay's a smurai forever and raise mia's child too. and please show the wedding of mia and jaden , and mike and emily together and how they propose to the girls.

good luck,
sophi

please please write ore to this story like 30 chapters but you can take your time and do it. you are an amazing writer and you should be proud

great job,

sophi

long, idiotic and stupid story
good job
i'm proud of u

that is so dramatic and i loved every second of it. Yes my name is really Emily

almost there one more story!

still reading and this is so dramatic WoW!

Still reading all most done

I've gotten this far today and im not stopping now i'll leave a comment at the end so you know i read them all good job