| Reviews for Unexpected: An Understatement |
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   TheEliteLabRatsLover chapter 1 . 3/30 this is absolutely adorable. |
| Fudgequeen72 chapter 1 . 2/17 SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL! WE NEED A SEQUEL. This is toooooo good! |
| KYAAAA chapter 1 . 1/8 MY HEART |
| Andrewariah chapter 1 . 10/18/2019 amazing, please write more :)) |
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/28/2019 Beautiful... one of the best Merthur fanfictions I've seen... *holds out empty bowl* more please.. |
| m chapter 1 . 1/16/2019 good job! |
| Berrybanana05 chapter 1 . 8/1/2018 Awww |
| gaylelbf chapter 1 . 7/24/2018 Interesting |
| Catherine chapter 1 . 7/17/2018 Omg I love it! Especially cause you said 'mild slash', and then Arthur just straight up 'lunges into Merlin'...genuis:D Beautifully written3 |
| paradoxicalperson chapter 1 . 7/15/2018 *gay |
| paradoxicalperson chapter 1 . 7/15/2018 That's super gray I love it |
| Storyteller127 chapter 1 . 6/15/2018 I so wish that this would have continued. It's an amazing story. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2018 That's kinda gay |
| THEPERSONWHOLOVESTAGYOUREIT MM chapter 1 . 5/18/2018 FANTASTIC |
| Taz chapter 1 . 10/26/2017 Very good. I enjoyed reading that. The one thing I would suggest is changing Merlin's dialogue to be more fondly insulting. For example, tweak "Do not worry, Prince Arthur. I've protected you before and I can protect you now. I'll protect you forevermore, sire. Have I not stayed by your side since I've arrived in Camelot?" to: "Do not worry, Clotpole. I've protected you before and I can protect you now. I'll protect you forever more, Prat." Merlin whispered to him fondly. "Have I not stayed by your side since I've arrived in Camelot?" |
