| Reviews for Temptation |
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Sidnika chapter 1 . 5/4/2016 Wow, great story! I've only played Witcher 3 myself (I'm on playstation) but I love the plot and am trying to get hold of the back story, but it's a little difficult without any of the other games! This gave me some hints though ;) Thanks a bunch for a great fanfic 3 |
Aeltari chapter 1 . 3/29/2016 Yes! This was excellent! I definitely see Geralt as a gentle, considerate lover. I don't imagine him wanting to hurt his lovers. |
DaWitcher chapter 1 . 12/4/2015 Excellent story continued you should. I really enjoy reading about these two together. My story about the couple take a radical path as my imagination tends to run wild sometimes. Thanks I look forward to with hope that you will add more to this. |
The1Wolf chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 Great fic! |
TakingAWalk chapter 1 . 9/24/2014 Man, this was awesome. I was looking for a good, meaningful story involving this couple, and this more than delivered. Great work on the characterizations and dialogue. And, of course, the wonderful smut. |
SpringBorn chapter 1 . 1/19/2013 First time reading a fic for this and I loved it. |
SootyPhoenix chapter 1 . 12/11/2012 Having recently started to read Blood of Elves I can truly appreciate the way this is written, the way the characters are portrayed is perfect and it really does remind me of the way the original author wrote the book. Well done! |
DarkquillMaster chapter 1 . 7/27/2012 This is fairly well written. have you thought of continuing the story? With Geralt as the main character maybe? |
arkblazer chapter 1 . 6/30/2012 Good story, Triss and everyone else was spot on. Maybe what she did was a bit too selfish of her but is on the realm of possibilities for what she'd do. Its well written, has good details; although i sort if wanted to see more of the other witchers. Nevertheless i guess you want me to be nitpicky and constructive so here goes: my nit pick is just a big preference of mine so please bear this in mind. But i felt that it had pacing issues. it felt a bit slow and long-winded at times. Mind you, i'm a big add kind of tard but i sort of stopped a few times while reading it. this nitpck is very subjective so please dont pay too much attention to it. Just something i had to come out and say, but like i said its a subjective nit-pick. Maybe you could spread the details more around the story instead of keeping them in a few big paragraphs... dunno really. other big advise is the sex scene. the foreplay was goo,d you put good details, it was both hot and romantic but then it kind of lost that intensity when the actual sex began. like you gave good details well onto when he put it in, but then you went "and then they had sex" In short you seemed to show the foreplay but you just told the sex, which was disappointing... You could have added more kissing and touching while they were at it. |
PestoMonkey chapter 1 . 6/6/2012 Your characterization of Triss is just perfect for that situation, I think. It fits really well with the images we get of her in "Blood of Elves" and it makes sense (to me, anyway) that she'd still be carrying a torch for him after all these years. She never really got to scratch that itch fully, I think. I really enjoyed the bits of dialog between the two of them, too. I just wonder who was listening at the door ;) |
DarkLaraJade chapter 1 . 6/6/2012 I like it. Where's the rest Danish? |
trouble97018 chapter 1 . 5/20/2012 Great story! Of course sooner or later Geralt is going to realize he's been had AGAIN. That's a conversation I'd love to listen in on! |
Starkiller Jedi Knight chapter 1 . 5/20/2012 Great one shot! I am really fond of this couple. Hopefully you'll write more Geralt/Triss stories. keep up the good work! |