This is lovely!

Love it! It actually really sounds like Mako! His internal conflict between Korra and Asami is well developed, described and put together very good. Keep writing! :)

Love it! Totally Mako! Keep writing more!:)

thats so him

Wow. I really loved this. Like, a lot.

It's genuine on Mako's part, and it shows that even though he may act like it- he doesn't have everything under control.

It's nice to see him struggle with the realization of being torn between two beautiful and all around wonderful ladies, not know what to do or how to do it.

It was like getting into his mind and actually watching his thoughts pass by.

I loved it. Keep up the amazing work!

oooOOoo I really like this! It's very believable. And really detailed and sweet

I loved this. It went in depth and you explained his inner conflict so skillfully! Thank you for writing! :)

Heh, this could almost be like a journal entry of Mako's after episode 7...pretty interesting.

Nice work! :)

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Thanks for writing, I was in dire need of a good Makorra story and you have fulfilled my need! :)

THE BEST MAKORRA ONE-SHOT I HAVE EVER READ SO FAR! THIS IS AMAZING! IT REALLY DOES SOUND LIKE MAKO. I-ugh It's amazing!