I do love the story. However your math is wrong when it comes to age of Hawke and Anders. If Anders is 17, and Hawke is 37, Hawke would've been 20 around when Anders was killed and would've been about 13 when escaping the blight. Not possible. He was in his 20's, let's say around 23 when escaping the blight, which would make him around 30 when killing Anders. Making him 47 when Anders was 17.

This was amazing. A perfect mix of humour, chemistry, sorrow and sweetness. My heart actually hurt when I read the inscription that Hawke had placed for the circle in memory of his first meeting with Anders. Beautiful work on a truly under-appreciated story. Thanks!

Aaaaw... it's over! BUT I LOVED IT ALL! ! ! I'm glad we got to see Varric and all them. I could see all that actually happening in the game too :) it was all so funny.

And Pounce's view point? Hahahaha! Loved it! Poor Garrett.

I loved it all and sad to see it end but I know I'll be rereading it many times. :D

Best of luck in all your writing! Hope to see more! :)

Nice ending. :) Thank you for a lovely story!

lol the 1. paragraph was funny (furry-faced human)
what a lovely Reunion.
Nice to see the old companions again ...

It is over? not possible :D

Heh heh heh. Made me giggle, the ending. I love cheeky Garrett. And Varric? That part I was effing crying it was so funny. I love Varric. Leads me to wonder, though, how the others will react to seeing Anders again. -shrugs- Until then, let's not hang up over future prospects.

:) This chapter was certainly naughty. Levyn, Dagna, Garrett, Anders, Petra. -waggles finger- naughty naughty. But I'm happy for Levyn. Always felt bad for him in DA. Poor idiotic dear. Dagna and Petra tsk tsk. Taking bets. Hahaha!

Either way, I loved it all, like always. Excited to see where this goes and can't wait to read more! Best of luck!

Ah a nice fluffy, cozy chapter ... You made me smile a long time.

They had enough drama/tragedy for one Life (or 2), what do you think? :)

Everything about this fic, and especially this chapter, is squishy and happy and causes all kinds of warm fluttery feelings. I love the overlaid descriptions of the young Anders and his memories of his former self. This fic is so sweet that I worry it'll give me a stomachache. :D

The only thing I don't like - and this is a gentle criticism, please don't take it too harshly - is the italicized thoughts from the two characters. I feel that the story could do just as well, perhaps even better, without them. They distract from the rest of the prose, take the reader out of the third person narrative you're crafting. If you like the style, by all means keep it in there, but I think the actual writing of this beautifully sweet story would be better without.

*lol* Wonder how he's dealing with the fact that is considerably younger than Garrett this time?

Fruck yeah. I fruckin loved it! :D i'm so glad those two were finally able to become closer. The Carver scene made me giggle so much.

Love it and can't wait to read what's next!

I still sense bad things awaiting but hey! That makes a story great! And if not, this story is ALREADY amazing.

:) love it!

ahh so nice ...
so sweet how Hawke want to be reponsible to his subordinate Anders.

But love is way more important ...!

Your story is absolutely lovely, full of life and character. I'm rather sceptical concerning themes like "travelling in time", "reincarnation" etc., but your view of the situation is absolutely believable. I love the deep feeling with which both Anders and Hawke are written, all their struggle, revelation and inner turmoil. Nice joke added here and there makes the story even better. Please go on!

:D It was great! Hawke problems! Anders problems! JUSTICE problems! Lol problems all around! Though I'm still getting vibes that Hawke might still collapse completely if something happens to or if Anders leaves... Kinda scary and yet I'm excited!

Can't wait for the next one! :D

Well I definitely love it! :) The thought that Garrett van finally find his 'justice' for all he's done. Even though he is hurt and the like. Anders can save HIM this time :)

I love the whole idea of this story and it is very well written. It made my stomach clench at some parts. And I even re-read the firat two chapters several times already. Haha, that doesn't happen often with me.

I love it all and the thought of Hawke with grey in his hair and beard is very attractive. Best of luck writing the next chapters and honestly can't wait to see what happens next!

Ah i am happy , that you continue this story.
Justice as a Relationship-Advisor and not so bad as i expected.
(the years with Anders seem to affect even an Spirit)

poor Hawke if he really was lonely all the Years since Anders Death.
OMG Jowan is still alive and in the Tower , surprise surprise

waiting for more and hopefully the Happy End finally :-)
xoxo Misstress