that was one of the best stories i Have ever read. Great Job!

This is a wonderful story! I love it! So original, so much detail! I would do anything to be able to write like you! Keep up the good work!

Very sad, but thoughfull fic. I liked it alot, almost as much as Ocean Eternal. Very nice work!

Very cool story.

SWEET! You finished it! This is great!

And you say you cringe when you read this story too Ginnie. You should do the opposite, blush instead. Who would've thought there was a talented writer in that artist's mind of yours? This is way above Grade 8 average. Around my age, yeah right. If I didn't know any better I would've thought you just wrote it with a more kiddy voice, and posted it to fool me.

No need to kill me with a scimitar, Ginnie! I read it last week! Good stuff!

I read this story before already, and I loved it. Its about 20 something to 30 something pages in length. Great descriptions, and wonderful story line. Kinda makes me want to print it out and share it with the world for some reasons.