yeah that was fucked up nut i can't help myself for wanting more please make a squeal

You are not fucked up! Ok, maybe a little! But please please please update soon as possible want to know what happens next chapter please please please update soon! :-)

This is amazingly creepy! I loved it!

I...LOVE...POT NOODLE!

This story is quite good too :3 :-) :D

Oh, who am I kidding? THIS STORY IS FREAKEN AWESOME!

awsome

I can tell that this story is going to get GOOD. Wait, no, it's already good. It's going to get PHENOMENAL! I love the Outsider's spin you put on the "I see dead people" idea. You have so much brilliant detail in this story that I was hooked by the first few lines. All I can say is that I can't wait for the next chapter!

Basking, basking, basking in the crazy awesomness! :D This is really good! I think you should put more foreshadow into your chapters. :) A story is nothing without foreshadow. ;) I can't wait to read more, my dove! :)

And funny at the same time idk why just the ending ...anyway I like the Way describe each thing ;-) GREAT WORK

Omg this story is mad detailed with

hahaha, i dont know why i found this story funny but i did :)

It was really good by the way. Are you going to turn it into a full story? please do.

you said 'can you tell im a little fucked up' well would that make me fucked up to for liking it? ;

anywhoo, i hope you update soon :)

Holy shit, I can just tell this is going to be crazy. You make such good horrors. Update soon!