Hmm... reading and enjoying don't usually like to much angst cause it ruins the story but this is good!

Cute! Well-written and riveting. :3

Loved the story...I myself like to RP as yamato online..and the relationship yamato has with kakashi in this story is the exact one I use...it's like there brothers...

This is great! You could use a beta reader to go through and catch your typing mistakes though.

So scary! And written so well! I must find out what happens next! I'm a little surprised, though, that Yamato didn't have Sakura check him out. At this point, I'm sure her medical skills are more than adequate, and time could be in short supply.

The father really did end up paying quite a high price. However, his way of making amends-sacrificing his life for Kakashi's-was noble.

I liked it :)

Yay Kashi and Sai Are both okay! *w00t*

Woah.. my reaction of the crazy girl...as much as she's done to the shinobi...the action she put into the story was great!

Go maniacal laugh of insanity! ahaha..lolz

i find the father's reaction puzzling, wouldn't he have reacted somewhat interesting, after he finds out his own daughter's suicide he seems extremely calm...could he be plotting something? nahs most likely not..

but still! this is intriguing!

So Kashi and Sai can both end up dead. All because they took forever to get that crazy chick, and now even she is dead.

A nice bit of combat in this one, Dis. The notion of dire straits was embedded throughout. Also, it was clever of Sai to pick up on the ominous nature of Tsukiko's final warning.

Really love this story!

Thank god she's dead, now we just need to take care of everyone.

I agree with your last line, Dis. Tsukiko's motivation is no longer what it was. If anything, it's more warped now than before. She's about to make a rash move!

Love this story!