Omg you've written this really really well so far, incredibly similar to the game

*cries because story is unfinished* I was really enjoying this. I always tend to put the countries up on this pedestal of powerful-ness, so it's interesting to see them scared, weak, and overpowered for once. Guess I'll just have to go watch hetaoni if I want any resolution :(

Oh no! The Allies are here? I hope they find the Axis soon

Me and my friend are obsessed with Hetalia and consequently HetaOni (we love horror) and when we play I always turn on Random Chases. Then when we get chased I laugh like an idiot and she shrieks! I think scary things are funny so I'm kinda cracking up as I read this... Please continue!

It is an evil version of Britain's cooking

I am only thirteen, so I'm not allowed to play or watch games like this- EVER. Thank you for writing this version! It really helped me and this way I don't have to actually do the game
*crying* so sad (I know the general storyline)

Really good! I like the story quite a bit! Please don't stop writing this like other people have!

Write more or I will dieeeeeeee!

Oh Italy even when your running for your life like 24/7 you still have time to make pasta.

I really enjoy this story but I have one problem. According to the HetaOni storyline they don't get their human names untill they make that pact and that's the only thing I have problems with!
But still this is a really good story, sorry if this offends in any way!

Dude, please update!

This is EPIC!

Oh plz continue! I love hetaoni so much

This is really good and you have done a wonderful job novelizing the game. Do you plan on continuing past where the game has stopped? (I think you should *wink wink*). ;)

OMG I love this since I can't play the game I've been trying to find the story on fanfiction. Please continue don't stop!