Just started this can't wait to read it!

It was very angsty. I would have liked more humor but it was COMPLETELY worth it. COMPLETELY. This is the first time ive enjoyed such an angsty story. Love it!

I'm a little late but glad i could take the time to read that story. It was super fantabulicious and a great story. ((PS: its gave me a lot of feeellzzzz...))

It took me forever to get that keypad thing. I actually went to my keypad and once I finally got it, I fangirled so hard.
That was super cute. I really liked this story. :)

Wow you've created a whole universe while still having the character well, in character and I like that! You picture their emotions well! I'm going to go read the sequel...

This story is too good! Deserves a sequel much more!

Awwwwwwww! :) Now time to read the sequel! :)

that last line made me laugh , usually its pepper who delivers that kind of line in convos with tony

ok ok much better, i couldnt swallow her putting up with that shizz, no self respecting woman would, i don't care what anyone says , gotta draw the line somewhere!

". In that breath there was disappointment, there was hurt. But there was also understanding. Understanding that this was just the way things were. In order to have him, she had to carry his baggage with him. He wondered where her breaking point was. How many times he'd have to screw up before he'd finally lose her."

in the words of padme amidala to the love of her life anakin "you're going down a path i cannot follow!"

he's cheating and she's ok with it , helll to the no! but i will see this evil plot to its ugly end coz clearly this will end badly!

he's cheating on her , figures...

i'm not sure pepper and tony are the same age? i highly doubt it , i think he's at least 10yrs older than her but for the sake of your story i'll suspend belief

hmmm i'm not sure about them hooking up so soon , so what he's never going to be a womaniser playboy oozing sexiness yet has the one woman in his life who's immune to his charms?
i'm gonna give your story the benefit of the doubt , its not bad apart from that , the thing about tony i like is the whole taming of the bad boy by the right woman, his womanizing ways are only because he hadnt found that one woman who would be everything to him until pepper... :)

damn , the lady sure has made up her mind! lol so she's going to be THE expert on how tony stark ticks NICEEE

A nice moment with Jarvis? THAT WAS FUCKING SAD.

I love your story.

-TC