I really like this, you should keep writing!

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That was absolutely wonderful! I love how you wrote Asami, she was absolutely perfect in voice and action. Korra was really well-written too.

Thank you so much for this. It was so nice to read a fic where Korra and Asami's fallout with Mako is handled maturely, where they're actually friends. I only wish something like this would've happened in the show.

This was really good! I liked it. It was all very believable. Your portrayal of Korra and Asami was great.

this was adorable! good job!

Nice work on this.

Woah, what a fantastic piece of writing! I absolutely love that you humanized Asami, and told the story through her eyes rather than Korra's -it was a nice change of pace. Great work, keep it up!:)