| Reviews for This is Us |
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Guest chapter 15 . 2/18/2018 please update |
haleywilson499 chapter 15 . 1/27/2017 update please |
Anna.B chapter 15 . 6/29/2015 story is great, seems like everything happens to your OC, would be nice to see her at work again working as a nurse or training to be a doctor. probably to early in the story but I hope she interacts with Nate, and he gives her doctorly advice like he did with Ricky when Brax was away - I liked those scenes with Nate taking care of her and the baby. Curious if Charlie will die like the show as well. hope you update soon. |
fanficforyou chapter 15 . 5/21/2015 This chapter was a really sad one, with Ruby not wanting to let go, to Casey kissing his daughter for the final time and the toll that it's taken on everyone, including Amelia Look forward to reading on :) |
Lazza77 chapter 15 . 5/2/2015 What a sad update. My heart goes out to them all. |
fanficforyou chapter 14 . 4/2/2015 I did not expect that ending with Amarlia dying - poor Ruby and Casey! Cant wait to read on to see how they will cope with this loss :) |
fanficforyou chapter 13 . 3/2/2015 So glad to see that you have updated! Really interested to see who Dean is and what his connection with Amelia is and to see what Charlie will choose Cant wait to read on :) |
lazza77 chapter 13 . 3/1/2015 Well there are lots of interesting things coming up. Looking forward to reading more. |
fanficforyou chapter 11 . 12/11/2014 Thanks for updating! It's been a while! Loved the wedding reception! It was so nice to see amelia/brax so happy at the beginning and heath and bianca ending up sitting and talking i didnt expect that ending! poor amelia - losing harry, especially on her weddding look forward to reading more of this :) |
fanficforyou chapter 10 . 10/22/2014 It took me a while to read Hidden Secrets but i loved it! Really nice wedding ceremony and loved the vows cant wait to read more :) |
lazza77 chapter 10 . 10/15/2014 Lovely update. The wedding ceremony was beautiful. |
H20xSpelboundfanx chapter 10 . 10/15/2014 Love the chapter, here's an idea maybe Darcy is coming home from school, walking along the side of the ride and either it's Jake or Adam kidnapps her or attack and defends him off and then runs into the woods near by, but gets lost (almost like what happened when she took Harley) The Braxtons start looking for when she doesn't return home from school and gets summer bay involved as well as the river boys ( maybe darcy collapses in the bush or something) and few of the river boys find her but she doesn't want to talk to them and the first Braxtons that get there are Casey and Kyle, just a suggestion, hope it helps, would really like it if you used it! |
Guest chapter 9 . 1/7/2014 Whens the next chapter coming? Can't wait |
Charlotte chapter 9 . 10/12/2013 Still loving this story, please update soon |
Guest chapter 9 . 10/12/2013 Amazing update! Love this story, can't wait for more ! :) |