the tale of the dying star was very impressive.

Anymore!

Wait, I'm a little confused... Was she raped?

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Absolutely brilliant! At first I was a bit taken aback by your portrayal of Loki as a needy boy starved of affection and desperately in need of approval. But slowly, your Loki grew on me, and it fits with his actions, and the reality that actually his family is there to shower him with love and affection, but he's just drowning in his self-doubt and blinded by the urge to dominate everyone so that no one can ever reject him again. If you could also include his mischievous and sometimes even sinister side as he uses magic to manipulate people, it would show what a drastic change he has undergone in terms of his character development before and after he met Kara.

I did not expect this twist in chapter 17 that he could use his magic to heal, and that in turn would give him the adoration and recognition that he wants so desperately. Great job! Looking forward to the next chapter

I really am enjoying this story, I hope you return to it so I can see how it ends.

You have to continue this story! Please I can't stand not knowing!

Please finish this. Beautifully written.

Please come back and finish this story! It's SO good, and judging by the reviews there are tons of us out here desperate to find out what happens next. You left us cruelly with the promise of a juicy next chapter, but that was nearly 3 years ago!

I don't know if you are going to write more about this story but let me tell you that, if you do, I will be there to read it! Its an amazing story, probably one of my favorites! I hope you are doing well and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter! From a French Fan :-)

This chapter was ON POINT. I'm super angry that there is only one more to go and it's obviously not over yet. UPDATE.

Noooooo, this can't be all there is! Please come back and finish it!

Nooooo. I just discovered this and realized now you haven't updated for 2 and a half years! Are you OK? Will you continue? I have to know what happens!

neuuuuuuuuuu pls update this hurts me ;-; I love this story too much it's amazing

I kinda want to cry because you stopped this perfection of a really amazing story! It's official, this story is my favorite one! You have to write and I hope you find inspiration!

Kára is such a lovely character. I love her and how she is slowly turning Loki into someone who can be loved. Some parts are sad and I kinda feel bad for him.