Reviews for My Brother
be careful chapter 1 . 10/22/2019
Mickey Mouse: control mickey, it's me okay?

and don't you remember me mickey?

i'm real mickey mouse!

and it wasn't me, that's agent mouseman!

he's bad guy no good?

please trying to be careful?

there's no need for fighting on ebby gray leader of heroes friends,

or everybodies again!

they won't listen to it!

it's just agent mouseman's power puppet hiting for this!

you must stop agent mouseman and gang, but hurry before it's too late!?

and help me!

tell everybodies snapped about it do something!

i cant move it!

PLEASE HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP!

From: Mickey Mouse?

(the-end?)
Ostwald chapter 1 . 4/14/2017
Mickey: oswald, helllllllllllllp!
Ostwald: hahahaha, *grab-mickey*
so well meet again mouse boy...
oswald the lucky rabbit will never rescue with you!
*evil-laugh*
*close-door*
Oswald: hanged on, mickey?
i'm save ya!
*open-door*
mickey!
Mickey: ozzie, hurry!
Oswald: coming mick!
Ostwald: oh-no you don't!
mouse boy, it's mine, now!
Oswald: ostwald! you!
let my little brother go!
my evil twin brother!
Ostwald: never!
*fight-oswald*
Oswald: ouch, stop it!
Mickey: oswald!
hey, leave him alone!
Ostwald: exactly, *touch-my-finger-move-mickey*
mouse boy. you're so cute...
*kiss-your-face*
Oswald: *gasp* *angry-face*
ostwald bastard!
you bastard!
*fight-ostwald*
Ostwald: aaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!
*cut-ropes*
Mickey: i'm free!
*fight-ostwald*
Ostwald: aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!
Mickey: aaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!
Oswald: mickey!
*grab-mickey*
i gotcha mick, i gotcha?
Mickey: *my-face-on-red-smile*
oswald you save me?
Oswald: ohh, it's nothing...
brother...
Mickey: *kiss-your-face*
Oswald: *my-face-on-red-smile*
aww mickey mouse...
Mickey: you promise?
Oswald: yes i'll promise?
let's go home?
Mickey: yes?
(the-end...?)
Firelover123 chapter 1 . 12/31/2016
I just finished playing the second game a while ago, and I as just ser thing through the fanfiction, and this is extreamly well written! I was clicking on this expecting this to be a really cringy yaoi fanfiction but I was imminently proven wrong! This is really good! The word choicing and immense detail is great! Keep up the good work!
Disney Syndulla chapter 2 . 11/2/2014
I really wanna play that game!
ilovecartoonsgirl chapter 2 . 7/3/2014
Oh my heart! I haven't played the epic Mickey games, but now I really want too...Anyway, I loved this fanfic! It's brilliant, wonderful, and heartwarming! I love brotherly moments!
Kiwi Lee Scipio chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Hey, do you mind if I use your story for a picture?
steven.acevedo555 chapter 2 . 7/12/2012
I loved it. Did you see the cinematic trailer that was posted yesterday on Youtube? Keep up the good work.
William's penn chapter 2 . 7/12/2012
If this were a movie, i would probably cry. I love my brothers very much, and the whole brother relationship mickey and oswald have in this story makes me feel good. Well done!
Furgemancs chapter 2 . 6/27/2012
Wow, this was a really sweet, heartwarming story, almost cried in the end of chapter 01.
Indeed I never played with the game yet, but I like how this bit came out:D Brothers forever!
Anthony W chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Do a story about The Wild! And see if any of us can create an archive of The Wild, along with the other "Movies" in the archive!
Lady Peppermint chapter 2 . 6/3/2012
AWWWWW! So cute, is this all of the story? Thanks for the enjoyable read. :)
N. Harmonik chapter 2 . 6/3/2012
You absolutely must write more stories about Mickey and Oswald. This two-shot has got me hankering for more.
Mighty Agamemnon chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Awwwww...Donald's my favorite character, but I really like the bond between Oswald and Mickey and you portrayed all the bittersweet moments of it quite well!
N. Harmonik chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
This is simply fantastic. I'm a sucker for fics about sibling love.

There's actually an Epic Mickey section though; it might be worth it to put this fic there instead.

And I think it was explained in the game that only Mickey could use both paint and thinner because of his being merged with the Shadow Blot. Although perhaps Oswald came into contact with it as well...

Do continue, please.

*sings "Mickey Mouse Club March"*