This was amazing! It can't be finished! Loki has to find a way to fix it! Please write more!

Don't like the ending but your writing is good

I'm glad I skipped to the end and didn't read the whole story. I hate sad endings.

I didnt expect a sad ending. A little disappointed not gonna lie but it was amazing nontheless. Wow not a lot of stories have sucha great dynamic and sad twisted end. wonderfull

it can't end like that! :((( (but it was a really good ending, even though i down want to end it like that)

this is fantastic i love it. you are such a good writer, please finish this (meaning please dont stop midways :))

It's very terrible end and it make me anxious but I like this story.

Caramba,será que o Odin botou ele no cofre por ser uma "relíquia roubada"... Gostei do primeiro capítulo.

Frostiron!

You eated it entirely !
(OuO)/

that story is awesome OMG ! so cool really
:) Poor Loki hope the good one is dead in the moment the badly toke is body from himself

Poor Thor
I love it ! you have a perfect 10 !
xoxo

Loki's farewell...this is like The Hunger Games! OMG this is so sad! This sort of reminds me of Chobits with the dark Loki and all. Like Chi and Freya ( also called the dark Chi)

NAILED IT!

that was so sad. THAT ENDING WAS TRAUMATIZING

OMG TRAGEDY! Poor Loki! So they all die? Oh no! I actually really enjoyed it though! Thor cries at the end! Loki's kiss and his farewell! So sad!

Loki's kiss...oh so sad! Awe! I'm really feeling the sadness now!