nice one! I love the conclusion

This was heartbreaking. I love it.

That was a beautiful and lovely piece. Fai's inner thoughts seem so spot on. And I adore Kuro in this!

I got a bit confused at the end... it would probably help if I finished past the first 25 episodes

Awesome story! It really works!

I really enjoyed this! I wish It wasn't just a one shot though, lol :) I loved it, it was so cute at the end!

I love the sympathetic side of Kurogane. Great job!

Pretty cool

Wow, that was always a heartbreaking quote from Fai (I want to die, I want to die...) but you took it and made it even more haunting. Thank you for writing this

It's people like you that make fanfiction a better place (: like seriously, i check up on Tsubasa updates/posts everyday and there's never anything good, and you just made my day XD Post more?

poor fai... but at least he has kurogane

this is really good :)