| Reviews for Shiryokugakure: The Village Hidden in Plain Sight |
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laurajustin chapter 7 . 6/17/2019 Great story! Can't wait for the next update! |
Monster King chapter 7 . 11/24/2018 Please continue it soon |
jeracuda chapter 4 . 8/10/2018 It's to bad you've decided to abandon this story as it's pretty damn good. But anyways onto my thoughts I guess. There's no way the Hokage can be named a missing nin since she released herself from service to the Leaf not only under her authority as a Hokage and Clan head but under the authority of the Daimyo as well so no matter what Danzo tries until he uses Kotoamatsukami on the Daimyo it will be illegal (not like that's ever stopped him) |
Calebros chapter 7 . 6/4/2018 "shoulder prevented her from stopping" - I think you wanted to write the exact opposite here. Unless Tsunade okay with her beeting Tayuya and wanted Hinata to know she has her full support. So Jiraiya came back with the ordered stuff for the others and then left? Maybe I missed something, but I could swear nothing like this was written. I like the story so far. I hope you are going to continue it. |
Calebros chapter 6 . 6/4/2018 Please keep the lisp to a minimum, it makes reading what Teifu says really hard. It is not much fun trying to decode each sentence. |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/18/2018 I think it's rather obvious who you're planning on pairing Tayuya with. I could see Kurama appreciating her acerbic, foul-mouthed, abrasive personality. Interesting twist. |
Zela Night chapter 7 . 11/30/2017 When do they found their one village? I'm just guessing that's the reason for the name, but does it actually happen? |
dai sennin kurosaki d naruto chapter 1 . 11/29/2017 ok suppressing the 9 tails chakra won't stop naruto's healing. the 9 tails doesn't actively heal naruto it's like a side effect of it being sealed inside naruto. each jinchuriki has it's own unique abilities most are offensive naruto's is more defensive. the 9 tails just being inside naruto means he heals. suppressing it's chakra would maybe keep naruto from using its chakra but i doubt it. it's a good idea but you're working on the idea like others that the 9 tails actively heals naruto instead of a passive effect. |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 7 . 11/20/2017 well this was a great chapter quite long but cool prefer NaruTayu over NaruHina but it seems NaruHina will happen troublesome |
hennessyswagg83 chapter 7 . 11/20/2017 the Kyūbi is Tayuya's pairing? I thought I could hate anything more NaruHina but that probably just got a close tie |
hennessyswagg83 chapter 7 . 11/20/2017 It's Sannin not Sanin I thought that error would be corrected by now in future chapters |
Uzushiogakure chapter 7 . 11/19/2017 Quite the sad chapter |
thor94 chapter 7 . 11/19/2017 really good chapter. but hope you plan naruto also guess kurama name, because look like you turn tayuya relationship wih the fox stronger than naruto bond with the fox. and again naruto is always the last to learn information he should be the first to obtain. Hope it will be the last time it happen, and naruto will be the first to learn all the other important thing (like sage, stubborn naruto being the one to force kurama tell everything, etc) |
TigrezzTail chapter 7 . 11/19/2017 Interesting way to connect Naruto and Tayuya. Of course, will getting cut off be a good or bad thing for her? Tsuande is gonna have to find something in common with Naruto or she is going to be on the outs for a rather long time. |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/18/2017 LOL chapter 7! I LOVE the end of it. Looking forward to more. :) |