I'm loving the story, but the constant mix-up with names is beginning to irritate me.
In this one Andrew calls Bridget Shiv; a few chapters back it was Gemma instead of Greer. And there were more mistakes that I cant remember now.

So far I'm loving this. It seems realistic, and so far... one of (only) a few ringer stories that I wanted to read beyond chapter 1.
One small thin though, that stuck for some reason: detective twice thinks of asking/doing something, but then thinks that it's not even worth it. If it was done once, it wouldnt have bothered me, but twice... that part doesnt seem very professional (for a detective investigation).

I don't even want Bridget with Andrew. He's a dick. He doubts her when she's been and treated him the best. All he does is bitch and moan and not care about his daughter. In earlier chapters he was making excuses for Shiv when she treated him like shit and wanted to kill him. He's fucked up in the head and selfish as fuck.

i seriously loved this story, it was written amazingly, with so many details, sometimes I wondered how you even knew all those things. it's obvious you've tried really hard to write this story, and i really hope you'll finish it some day.

Wow! I just read the entire thing and I have to say that it was great! Please read mine and tell me what you think.
Amelie

this is awesome, i can't wait to read it all!

little hard to follow but good story line

what is with some of andrew's ideas? changing bridget's name to siobhan? do people know she's dead? how would they explain that? and i thought in one of your chapters bridget had red hair. if andrew wants her to look different, can she just let it grow back?

Never realised that addicts face so many temptations each day in so many acts I would just take for granted. Wish Juliet had stayed strong but of course she's only starting.

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Sorry. My finger hit the button before i had the chance to log in. But this was a great chapter. Ireally want to know what Catherine did to Juliet to make her so crazy. I knew she was a bad mother, but I never imaged she was abusive. Then again, ignoring your child's needs definitely counts as abuse. Please update soon!

Hey!
I'm so glad you're healthy again and able to write! This was a fantastic chapter. I can see Andrew is finally coming around, however very slowly, but he's doing it. I just can't wait for him to fall on his knees and cry. I know I would once I came to that realization. Please update soon!
May

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Excellent chapter. I'm scared for Andrew, though. I'd be scared for anyone who went to Iran. Anyway, I really liked the chapter. I did see a bit of run-on sentences here and there, though. But besides that, everything was great! Please update soon!

Great chapter! I have to agree with everyone on this: I wouldn't be comfortable with Andrew going to Iran either. Let's hope he gets back alright.

I love having the family together! I read every chapter and I'm in love with this story. Awesome job! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Update soon!

-Brokengirl24