The Army and the Marines are 2 different branches of the military. You had Sutherland say that they were in both at the same time.

Old story, I know, but if these guys had done those things, they would not have just been discharged - they would have been spending most of the rest of their lives in prison.

So they force him to play and bring up oh you played it while your mom was dying and at her funeral thats fucked up to bring that up as an excuse to help force him in to playing for them when he clearly didn't want to

Not a bad start, but 12:15 pm is 15 minutes after noon - it's not at night. Midnight is 12:00 a.m.

Good ending. This chapter was better than the others in terms of formatting and spacing. Please use that in any future stories so the paragraphs don't seem to "run on" and harder to read.

Kensi should look for another place to live if she doesn't want to have nightmares - after all, her home was invaded.

Sutherland definitely went off the deep end.

Good. But I'm heartsick to hear that Kensi's ex, Jack, may be involved. What's going on here?

Really good. I'm curious to know who is trying to avenge their brother. Why are they holding Kensi? I'll keep reading.

This chapter was intense!

continue , please !
I love

I loved the coupling in here, you did a truly amazing job!

3 Kammel

hey could u have an epilogue...

please, continue

Really? You had to stop it there? Haha, great chapter! I loved it!

Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! :D x