| Reviews for Surfin' USA |
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Zeplerfer chapter 1 . 6/13/2014 ...what happened to the story? Are you updating it? |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2013 Update soon please! |
Guest chapter 5 . 1/5/2013 Super funny! Hope you update soon! |
BewareTheIdesOfMarch chapter 5 . 10/17/2012 I love the Bad Touch Trio... They make me all smily inside! Noooooooo! Don't put it on Hiatus! NOOOOO! *sniffles* I'll have to pass the time reading other Hetalia stories... Darn it! C'mon, just one more chapter? Before it snows or something? |
Zeplerfer chapter 5 . 9/2/2012 Oh man, I love this story. Stories were Alfred pulls Arthur out of his shell are always my favorite. And surfing is such an interesting setting! Are we going to get a scene where one of them rubs sunscreen lotion on the other? That would be incredibly hot. Bonus points if someone mistakes the white lotion for something else, teehee. I would also be happy with a scene of Alfred comforting an extremely sunburnt Brit. That said... I'm curious about what beach they're using? To my knowledge, most of the beaches in the East Bay are pretty cold, so they'd have to drive pretty far from Berkeley (like to Santa Cruz). Maybe you should have them all go to UCLA? I've always seen Alfred as a So-Cal kid. Also, given the UC's current finances, I'd find it pretty unrealistic that a British student would be able to get a full-ride scholarship. Since Arthur is supposed to be 23, it might be better to make him a grad student. They get paid. I'm really enjoying this story and do hope you find time to continue! Watching the BFT try to play matchmakers is always good for a laugh :) |
rexlover180 chapter 5 . 8/18/2012 Dude! I love this story! It's so amazing and I can't wait to see them be together! They're so cute and stuff! Keep up the great work and good luck with that Sophmore year of yours! |
FlockFighter101 chapter 5 . 8/16/2012 haha yes! this is so hilarious and i cant wait for the next chapter! god luck with school! i just started two days ago... grr... |
Kitty Purple chapter 5 . 8/15/2012 Aahaha XD I love Gilbert ! He is gorgeous XD ! BAD TOUCH TRIO ! GOOO ! |
JulietGivesUp chapter 5 . 8/15/2012 The dialogues are hilarious and written by a genius! The Bad Touch Trio's conversations sounds all too familiar also. And must I even begin about Prussia? He's all getting mad at the bird and might you have mentioned some hints of PruCan? Not that I'm shipping them or anything like that, but they seem awfully close. Speaking of Matthew, I love how smug and confident he sounds. It's pretty refreshing coming from the over-used cliche of Canada being all quite and shy. |
Nightowl572 chapter 5 . 8/14/2012 NUUUU! Please don't stop updating this! ...Well, I know how horrible school can be to free time, so if you have to, then that's alright. I'll just tough it out until next year TTTT But anywho, AWESOME CHAPTER! I love Matthew; he's so snarky. And the Spamano you snuck in there was adorable. Here's hoping Francis' plan works; the sooner Alfred and Arthur get together, the better (for the fangirls)! |
ScienceWolf chapter 5 . 8/14/2012 Lolz :D I loved the hint of SuFin you put in there :D it was cute! I liked the chapter... a couple of typos and at times it was a little difficult to understand, but otherwise it was awesome! :D |
stardust561 chapter 5 . 8/14/2012 LOL. The Seagull won the battle Gil . . . But can you win the war? XD Suntanning Antonio. Mmmm . . . I got the sexiest image in my mind . . . I bet Lovi like it too I just love your writing style, I bet the next chapter will be worth the wait. |
Tragos chapter 5 . 8/14/2012 Hello! There is only one problem with this story: there needs to be like, five times the amount of reviews, because this as awesome as Prussia! The surfer lingo was incorporated so well I could understand it without having to look it up, and the characters fit into the setting flawlessly. Good luck with everything! |
PunkWolf32 chapter 5 . 8/14/2012 Ahh yeah Seagulls vs Gilbert! winner SEAGULLS! hahahahahahahaha! Not to mention I got a very sexy image of a suntanning Antonio mmmmmmmmmmm.. And yay for francis Double entendou with the parfait! Not to mention Matthew being BRILLIANT! And now the BTT is on the job dun dun dun! Man This is so awesome! I wish my summer was this fun...Too bad I don't live near a beach. Anywho Fantastic chappie so tottallly worth the wait! Now I gotta write some completly pointless and frustrating essay for English BLEH! |
pursuinghappyness chapter 1 . 8/7/2012 This is such a fun read, especially during the summer! As another California girl who lives by a beach, this story really hits all the right notes...during a recent surf competition, I was actually comparing all the surfers to Hetalia characters. Every time I saw two blond guys talking I thought about this story. I'm so lame... Anyway, hopefully you'll update soon! |