Chapter 6 was epic. So very different from any other story i read.

I would be ecstatic and over joyed if you ever develop that into it's own story arc.

Yessssss... Nothing makes me happier than the promise of something awful being captured and brought to its former glory. It makes me so happy to see Smokescreen as a criminal mastermind, not for selfish gains but for his brother Prowl, and that he is willing to give it all up in order to make a true lasting change.

Love it!

JAZZ BABY NO HOW COULD YOU omfg. ;; I really hope you didn't just mess up your chances with Prowl! ACKKK!

All of these make me wish there's more. Ugh very adorable

Wow. How could Jazz possibly work himself out of the hole he dug in ch.2 here? I wouldn't mind finding that out!

Soo cute

Hee cute 1st chapter :3

NOOOO! You stopped it there?! That just leaves me wanting more! XD

is a really good story too...Perhaps you should just write most of these anyway, but in an order so that eventually they all get written but not all at once? It'd be nice.

OH! This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL! More of this arc would be...there are no words to describe how excited I would be if you wrote more of this, "The Art of Winning." These teaser trailers are gonna be the death of me, I swear! XD

This sounds so very cute, and I'd love to read more! Especially since I'm curious how Prowl will react once he's not drunk anymore. Also, curious about his past. What was he considered guilty of, and will Jazz ever learn of it?

So curious on why Prowl feels he's guilty and I am curious to what happens to him and Jazz afterwards.

Can you do more of this please? :) pretty please?

I really hope you decide to expand this chapter into a whole story! Travel broadens the mind and going with a tour group like that is a great way to make new friends- even with people from other cultures and levels of society. It's a perfect way for these two to get together.

If you're still willing to expand on a story or universe in these chapters, would you be willing to do this one? I feel like it has so much potential! Whether you do or not, these stories are very well-written! Thanks for sharing!