| Reviews for In My Veins |
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Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017 Ugly 1st person's pov is bad but it being Tobias makes it impossible to read. |
zamorabaggins chapter 1 . 5/19/2017 Intense. beautiful. Seems very in character. Well written. Thank you! |
girlboss589 chapter 1 . 3/7/2017 Wow. How did I not stumble upon this before now?! Short, sweet, and so beautifully written! To me, this was like a song; a symphony of sorts, words put together so melodically, so harmoniously, that I never wanted it to end! You really captured the beauty of intimacy, and I thank you for this. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2016 Very well written! |
shannon30033 chapter 1 . 5/28/2016 Wow, hot! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2016 Yep. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2015 Can I just say that was excellent? Your story felt just like part of the book, really. It was poetic but not exaggerated, hot but not obscene, and SO in charachter for both of them! This is very likely my favorite Foutris ever. Thank you for posting this! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2014 Oh my god this really turned me on. |
enj412 chapter 1 . 9/16/2014 This is beautiful. You captured how much Tobias needs and wants Tris so well. I wish you had written more fics. |
Windchimed chapter 1 . 8/27/2014 Nice and steamy! |
Robin C chapter 1 . 6/25/2014 Really great, perfect just how it would be. |
babyvfan chapter 1 . 5/19/2014 Nice job |
superfan24 chapter 1 . 5/8/2014 I can't believe that A) this was your first fic and B) you haven't written anything else. Fabulous! |
Bamcn24 chapter 1 . 4/23/2014 This was awesome! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2014 Fantastic! |