Me:THAT SON OF A ***** LET ME AT HIM HOW DARE HE HURT THE ANGEL!
My spirit (akira): *holding me back* It's a story all right it's not real calm urself!
Me:How ABOUT YOU BE RYOU THEN?!
Akira:I want it Rough with a side of your screams.
Me:...:your fucking insane

I must be crazy for reading this but whatever. It was I loved it. Keep writing.

awesome writting as usual, it made me shiver!

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. This is awesome and I feel a bit of shame for enjoying it, but it was awesome.

Gosh Tjay-sama! That's what I call a beautiful rape! Ohh please write more of those, its so goooooooood!

GREAT FIC FOR THE PICTURE I CHOSE. You should post a link to the prompt pic. :) And you called me MOS. I have been thinking about ending my emails with *MOS* so it was awesome you did.

I really liked how you got into Ryou's head in the beginning and his feeling of dread and how Bakura was getting in his head, I can picture it as he slings his backpack over his shoulder and trudges away...

As for the bullies commentary: good point. Bakura is not to be trifled with, and yet, it's probably more an evil ego thing than anything.

Your decriptions of both characters was awesome! The contrast is definitely noted.

The way you talk about how B tried to lure R into a false sense of security and R's knowledge and response to it...this shows this scenario and his nightmare have history.

I was stunned by the backhanded slap...I didnt see it coming! If Ryou didnt cry, I almost did for him. Dear Lord!

I pictured the things in the blow job scene even beforeyou typed them. Poor Ryou, he deserves a spirit like Yuugi's (but what would that leave Yuugi with...hmmm...)

BTW: thank you for typing CUM not COME. In erotic fiction, it's CUM and I think people assume I mispell it when I type it this way. LOL. I know my Erotica. It's cum. :) Sorry...side note.

It is obvious that for Bakura, it isnt about just dominance and control, because he could probably get any weaker person to do that with him...I feel he is genuinely attracted to Ryou-simply so for the opposites attract factor. He might get very aroused at the idea of his Light defying him and all the wicked ideas he could come up with to correct said behavior, he might like that, but Ryou doesnt seem like the type to want to test it. And wont.

I feel so bad at how this tendeer young man is so scarred up... like he needs someone to really take care of him (cue MOS' upcoming first time slash...*ahem*)

"I love it when you resist, can't you feel it." - told you. he would love him to flat out say NO so he can have that much more pleasure in the task.

I was so heartbroken when Ryou lost his footing... but that shows how evil Bakura is to him, when Ryou could be so good to/for him. I think if given the chance, Ryou would gladly become his Submissive in a realtionship that was caring-not have it thrust upon him (pun intended).

The story remains dark/gets darker in the bedroom with the duct tape and his position the floor. Poor guy... You do well to keep this dark!

Nice visual of deep red against pale skin. And great wording abour Ryou's physical pain.

The way he asked him to beg was truly sexydirty and I like how Ryou ignored him.

A forced orgasm has to be the most degrading thing, and yet Ryou endures it every time.

Bakura leaned forward and placed a gentle kiss on Ryou's bruised lips. "So beautiful," he whispered. - this statement pretty mucg sums up that his pleasure isnt in dominating, its in WHOM he is dominating. He takes a rather sick pleasure in it.

I cannot even begin to imagine what the rest of the night holds. GREAT DARK ONE SHOT. I loved it. I am excited to get to my sweet little fic in such contrast to yours but I am going by my prompt picture afterall. You know why it will take a few days but THANK YOU for obliging me and writing this. You're awesome! :)

And dark is definitely one of your fortes.

FSL-*MOS*

Poor lite Ryou