how u mention big blade nd better flexibility in the same sentence... why is it ppl think big swords are so cool anyways? Ninja's dnt use oversized blades they are supposed to be discreet nd stealthy kishimoto really fucked with the concept of shinobi art...shurikens,daggers,kunias,wakashi,tonton,fans smoke bombs ECT small discreet things

not a ninja with this weird ass sword wrapped in bandage's walking up nd down the streets broadcasting it nd he say "I'm a ninja"

I just noticed that the character cho you said he chose the latter which means he chose to die if he chose to serve shishio it means that he chose the former

thanks for the update, I'll have to reread and catch up again to understood the plot again, eugh soon many stories to catch up to.

dude you spend entirely too much time on what characters are wearing seriously you probably could come close to a full quarter of the entire story on just what every character is wearing. also a writing tip if you ever read a book most authors never refer to a character from a description of them. they have names use them, it's a bad habit here in fanfiction to refer to someone with a 3rd person description.

chakra control is a mental thing not physical. chakra control is learning how much to exert very much like learning your own strength. so as long as you know how to use it aka control it then it won't matter how much you have because you learned control already. the only way to lose control is to forget how to control it.

Seriously what the WTF! Why the hell would you put this type of crap in your fanfic.

No offence, but seriously rape of all things you put rape in your fanfic. That's the reason why SOPA and those like them are taking down your stories.

Wasn't expecting things to kick up only two chapters into the Hoshigakure Arc. But to see it do so, and within only a few days of the 50th anniversary of the Apollo 11 Lunar Landing... props on the thematic timing, my friend.

Btw, 2019.

Well...here's hoping that this rebellion falls flat on its a$$. Would be a nice change of pace from most o the other fanfics I've been reading lately. 8shrugs* sorry, but it kind of gets stale after a while, seeing the bad guys pull out even minor victories when they should be defeated, or the good guys victories constantly seemingly adding up to nothing. you don't do it that much, but this group working up the Hoshi shinobi seem like the sort where even if the plan at the moment fails, they'll still get a victory. I'm hoping they don't.

But that's just my own personal hang ups. You do whatever it is you have planned to do, and I'll read it. So please keep up the excellent work.

can't wait for the next chapter. i actually don't remember this filler, so I honestly don't k ow what happens next. but I pitty the poor fools who try to take on Naruto XD.

Oh yes. This is absolutely a delightful start to this arc

looking forward for naruto and iwa meeting each other

Interesting twist on who Akahoshi met his end and by who. Although looks like Sumaru hasn't changed regardless of other circumstances. Can't wait to see what goes down!

Here comes the attempted coup. Time for motal kombat!