Reviews for Within Time
AshallynDXA chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
Luv it! Well done, for your first Cap fic!
JeffersonStar chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
hlep i am a puddle of emotions asdfdzcgfsxjkmzxhccxzncmcxbnzmmczsxfesxzfdzxcdsaas fhkcnz
Arathelia chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
This was so well written and so incredibly sweet!

I'd love to read more, of maybe Jack coming back and interacting with SHIELD? SHIELD wondering about Jack's connection to Steven or even the Avengers reaction to Jack and Steve knowing one another? I mean, Tony would certainly be surprised Steve would know and be friendly with someone like Jack, considering he thinks Steve is old-fashioned.

Wouldn't Loki and the scepter be an alien problem, meaning UNIT and Torchwood involvement?
MisunderstoodMisfit chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Literally not even three hours ago, I was staring at the end screen of an episode if Torchwood and thought "What if Jack and Cap met?" - And then I find THIS lively piece and, well, it was stunning, love.
divia12131 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
I so so wish there were more fics with this pairing that are this good! This was really sweet and, in my opinion, totally possible! :)
Crysania Fay chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
I really liked this. I could easily see this happening in either series.
unlock.your.heart chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I've been wanting fic with these two for so long! THANK YOU so much for doing an excellent job with it! My only thing is now I want more from this, you wrote them both very well.
Jacof-alltrades chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
... I literally just ASDFGHJKL and fainted... or something... fantastic. Beautiful. Wonderful. FANTASTIC. PERFECT AND FLAWLESS!

3

I want more... please... yes

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Jacque
LadyDeb1970 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Lovely. You have Steve's innocence and terrible sense of loss; and Jack's compassion and Jack-ness.
Blinded-Kit chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
I loved this,

I had thought about the two of them before and I'm glad someone did it.

Thanks for writing

kit
Village-Mystic chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Nice crossover, thanks for sharing.