I decided to reread this and I have to sat, please update! !

I realize that you have moved on to another fandom, and are no longer writing for this one. I have really enjoyed all the stories you gave us for Okita, Saitou, and their respective partners. It would have been a lot of fun to see where you were going with the various story lines that you developed featuring them. But at least we can reread what you shared with us. I just wanted to thank you for writing all that you did for the RK fandom!

ahah Saitou is just a -tiny- bit jealous that his friend is paying attention to someone else ;) I just love how the humour comes so hm what's the word... I can only think of 'cold', in the way that everything is completely in-character and Saitou's mental analysis are therefore very direct. Like when he's thinking there was no need to give Okita a reason to restart talking about his wedding.

Well that paragraph didn't come off right at all. Oh well, I did get what I wanted to say *sweatdrop* I suck.

I'm loving so much to see the relationship of these two unfold :) The kiss scene was awesome, I love how you described it from Saitou's point of view. I've said it more than once, but I think you write him very well.

ahah I loved Sanosuke showing up right at the right moment! What a scene to find.

I really like how you write. I'm sure this is repetitive but it's the truth. The writing is very direct but has a lot of depth in it too. and I really like how you write Saitou in particular, he's just -him- just perfectly in character. So I'm really enjoying this slow growing interest/curiosity in him. I'm liking Tokio too, and I never searched too much on dancing salaries but damn, it's no wonder many women with attractive bodies do it.

I can't read more tonight but I hope to continue soon

So glad you updated, I love how snarky Saitou is in this. Awesome dialogue!

Yay! I love this story. Please keep updating.

Thank you *so much* for the update! I just reread this fic a couple of days ago, hoping that you would update it soon. I like how he shared the background he had with Soushi and Shousha. To reveal those things to Tokio, he truly has to trust her and respect her (as he said). They both have to know where this is going (and how permanent their relationship will eventually be)...especially when he declared "'You are mine,'... 'you have always been mine. You will always be mine.'" I hope the next installment is coming soon! Thanks again for the new chapter!

You have to take creativity when strikes you even if its towards your original fiction but thank you for updating!

it was nice to see Tokio and Saitoh so flustered and confused

Thank you *very* much for updating this one! I'm really enjoying the read! (I know that you said in your profile that you are working on original fiction at the moment, but I truly hope that you will keep updating this one for us.) Looking forward to see what happens next with these two!

...Ta-Chan?

Bwahahahaha, Tokio got herself into a right mess. THe best part is Saitou's reaction.

So what if the story is moving along like it is?
I think it's nicely paced if you're planning on a short fic.
But anyway, either way you want to go, it's just fine in my opinion.

I completely tore through this chapter and I'm sad to see that there isn't another one. *SIGH*
It's terribly cute.

My favorite aspect is Saitou's "Reasoning" as to why he should have to walk her to the diner.
Pancakes are the world's greatest breakfast item.
I would never turn them down.

And the way he treats her with respect is just awesome too.

Finally, I think that the way you pulled off the light-heartedness was just fine. Although, I have to admit, I was keeping my eye out for it because you mentioned it in your Author's notes. If not for that, i wouldn't have felt the tenseness of your writing when it came to that part.
But in all honesty, don't you worry. It was great.

The way Saitou worries over the feelings of Masa-chan was adorable. What a sweetheart.
And Okita's love for Shou-chan is adorable too!

(Hehe, every time I read the words "Shou-Chan" I thought of my best friend. His name is Shou and to spite him I use the -chana at the end too :P)

All right.
I can't wait to see what plans OKita and Harada have for the two of them.
Yay!

Write, write, write!
Until next chapter!

Thanks for writing,
-P.P.V.V.

HALLO!

Wow.
I'm so amazed at several things. In truth, I had to go back the last chapter to re-read it because I forgot some vital stuff.

Tokio is daring, that's for sure. I wonder what age she is to be almost finished paying her mortgage. Good gracious, debt free even from school wages? How wonderful. Too bad I don't have time to dance. And good thing I don't because...well, I can't dance! HAHAHAHAHA! The most it would earn me is a taste of the asphalt on the streets! *Cracks up*
To each their own way of paying their loans

Okay, that aside.

I personally LOVE Saitoh's attitude here. His aversion to the sexual play because he thinks himself above it. The way he RESPECTS the women enough to think that they should be above having to do what they do to make a living.

His professionalism is very realistic too.

At first, I was skeptical about the amount of money that Tokio was making. I am not surprised to see that you've done your research, though. Very thorough of you! I must applaud.

Lovely writing. You always have me hooked. It's a cute way to portray two faces. Lovely grammar and flow.

And I've said it before and I'll say it again - awesome artwork!

:)

One more thing, before I forget:
an interior designer, huh?

Interesting...

I hope that her dreams don't go crashing...

Oh dear...why do I have the feeling...?

Thanks for writing,
-P.P.V.V

i've been reading some of your stories... they're great! please continue updating!

oh. what a pleasant surprise! i didn't realize that you had just updated. am still loving this, and their chemistry together! they really are beginning to fall for each other and don't even realize it... oh saitou :)

kat

wow! i am really enjoying this :) i've always loved saitou's character. and i love your play on tokio's! please update soon! :)

kat

Yippee! Thanks for updating this one!

WOW! Have to say I *loved* every word in this chapter...brilliant 'kissing lesson' at the end...

Sighs...this chap was a wonderful read!

Thanks again, and have a great weekend!