| Reviews for Undeserved Detention |
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   hisnhers chapter 1 . 7/19 aww. very sweet. and protective. his |
| fly-flap chapter 1 . 2/20 This is a bit... unexpected. But really funny and sweet in it's own way. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2017 Aww. At first I thought it was Harry and Draco. Then it was oh... Aww, he is upset about him breaking his daughter's heart. |
| Gisel123 chapter 1 . 4/22/2015 Wow! In 335 words, you managed to make a wonderful story! Sweet, crisp and perfect! |
| Born in 20th Century chapter 1 . 2/3/2015 You should continue this! This feels unfinished! |
| Toodleoo chapter 1 . 1/5/2014 Protective Papa Snape! This is darling. I enjoy the twist, where the Mr. Potter we're expecting turns out to be Harry's son. :D |
| TycheSong chapter 1 . 1/22/2013 Haha-I want to know what happens next! This is so in character for him, it's brilliant! |
| lolaoz chapter 1 . 8/31/2012 Aww, so sweet. Love it! X |
| JeniDRalph chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 Yes, he can take away points and assign detentions. He's a daddy to a daughter. I think he would have done precisely that. |
| Rosajean chapter 1 . 6/1/2012 That was adorable! Loved it! |
| Alexa1993 chapter 1 . 5/18/2012 Cute! |
| notwritten chapter 1 . 5/16/2012 I like it Keep smiling. :-) |
| dayflow chapter 1 . 5/16/2012 very cute and nice reveal! :-) |
| Amethyst Skulkyrie Cain chapter 1 . 5/16/2012 Eileen is Severus' mother's name. Well written, and cute! :) |
| Still-On-Hiatus chapter 1 . 5/15/2012 And I thought that was Harry. Seriously. XD -jB |
