Hi

I just read your story it was very good.

Very cute story, write some more.

I love it. Please finish the story. Thank you

More More More. Continue the story PLEASE!

Lovely story, although I would have liked to see you expand on it more, but it still works well.

That is a wonderful story! I was wondering if someone would think up something like that. When I read it I thought about the fact that they were each other's first kiss and had wondered what else could have happened. Thank You!

i liked this story, but it was too short. it'd be really cool if you could write a happy ending maybe. but anywayz, it was a cool story. ; )

Hey I really liked that... write more..

I love this story! Its great! I hope that there will be more to it in the future

Good writing; an interesting idea.

good story. I hope youu write the sequel.