BISH FINISH IT

Please update! I love your story so far and I really want to know what happens next! Please,please,please update! Your story is great!

this is an amazing story with a good plot. I love it. It's a very good wetting style. I would loveeee it if you updated it ! pretty please

You are an amazing writer. I love this story. And I think it's a nice idea to have them closer than they really are. Makes it add more reasons to the story. Update soon! Know that there's one more person to read your wonderful work!

i like the storyline, its interesting, the dialogue is good, your style is good, the story is really good. however your overuse of italics is really distracting and annoying

Keep writing! update:)

Love the story up late at night again making sure that you keep on writing even though you dont have many views downt let anyone get you down

OMIGODS soooooooooooooooooooooo ggoooooooooooooooooooooooood ! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!

I like it...but can you stop italisizing so much (i think thats how you spell it) because it kinda distracts the reader from the story. There are some other grammer mistakes but thats okay. Good story thoigh!

this is goos but y r some words in italics? its just plain wierd

can't wait for more!

Please updte soon its been 2 weeks your story fans need you

Omg this is a good story please updated already

percy reconignez her at an istant and the solders grab her and then percy and annabeth have a "talk" then end of chap

S.H.I.T.

hahaha Annabeth is just the best :')

but Percy in the army, what the hell?

i cant wait to read what happens!