Rewrite of what exactly? Do you have any material to post at least a second chapter after "rewrite"?

Looking forward to the rewrite!

This is sad but live is hard so we should move on. I personaly haven't readed any of his stories but i will seethem if this acount is still up.

Oh. Well, I find the story, and hear it's going to be re-written. Alright. I can go with that. And my critiques will be fresh in your mind, assuming you haven't already finished the rewrite.

Alright. Looks good. Time to nit-pick.
1)Alex could have gotten all the information he needed by eating some random civilian. 1 less bum on the street, and he now knows all he needs to about this world, and what's going on.
2)If Superman used his X-Ray vision, he should be able to easily tell that Alex is not a human, or even a animal. No bones, no internal organs, not even a brain. Just biomass.
3) Why did Alex bother with taking out his Muscle Mass or Blade? Not only were they unneeded, but he's giving away information on what he can do, and information is power.
4)Supergirl is way off. There are a LOT of people who can knock Metallo around like that.
5) Alex showed absolutley on interest in aquiring Superman's/girl's powers. Why? All he needs is some blood, and with how they were being knocked around by Metallo, they very well might have lost a drop or two. And that's a point towards him just watching Metallo fight them, hurt them more, so he can just stroll along afterwards, and get himself some yummy powers.

Mate this is sick, like thw all mighty zeus in a world of mighty superheros, I would who will win in a fight,

Awesome this is one of the best i hope you add more

I know you have probably given up on this one. But if you can, please finish it. You are a talented writer and i hope to see you finish a great story like this and not let it go to waste. Even one update a week would be fantastic. I know i would wait for it. So yea, Im writing one simalar to this, except Alex arrives during the Thanagarian invasion when the league are captured. So yea. im no threat to your awesomeness but plz finish.

That was pretty neat.

ohhhhhh this seems really good don't give up on it.

this would be a good story if it werent for the grammar and such someone else should write this story then we might be able to actually read it

If you could right more that would be great

More I need more

I'm happy...ANOTHER!

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