I really liked this, especially the last chapter. That was...chilling. And completely believable for the two of them.

I can't tell, are Clint and Natasha training to kill each other?

You wrote good!fic and did not tell me! Your voices throughout are clean and perfect; this is unsentimental and thoughtful, excellent stuff.

This was really great! But can you just explain something to me? In the last chapter, what exactly is the meaning behind the sparring? I mean, are they just sparring or is there something behind all that? I'm just a little confused..

I. Love. This. Chapter. Great, great writing, you really captured the tension between the two of them from the film! I would love more in this story line :)

I quite liked the first two chapters, but I'm really not sure what you were going for with the third one. I feel as confused as Maria.

Very nice. Chapter 2 was my favorite...I just loved the characters, and Pepper being such a business woman...and the unfortunate realities of why they have to take those photos.

... This probably sounds kinda dumb, but I think I missed what's going on. They spar a lot, but what are they going for (besides perfection) and why does it freak Hill out so much?