| Reviews for Eric s Revenge |
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   tamwhit chapter 4 . 4/14/2018 please say you are continuing |
| Anon chapter 4 . 11/7/2017 What happens next?! Please continue |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/27/2016 Plz continue! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/17/2016 You're really need to work on your grammar. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/7/2016 Update plz I love it |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/11/2016 Plz update |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/22/2016 Plz update its awesome |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/5/2016 Plz update Its really good |
| ZanaBean chapter 4 . 8/16/2015 What the hell... Eric is not just a sadistic masochist. You need to work on your grammar (like leaving out important words) and when they talk don't be so formal contractions are your friend, use it's not it is when someone talks. Second you need to build ERIC, right now he's mostly just action, its like he himself is telling us the story and its falling flat. Add more of his thoughts not just like 'I tried to control myself but fail as she is purple' something more like 'I struggle not to squeeze to hard but as usual I find it hard to gauge my strength and tris' face slowly turns from shades of red to purple'. With that being said I think you have a very good start and I hope you continue with the story. |
| fandomfreak01 chapter 4 . 1/26/2015 MORE MORE MORE! THESE ARE SO GOOD! |
| p3aches chapter 4 . 11/22/2014 That was just so wrong... I like Eric and all, but that was too much for me... |
| Seraphonia chapter 4 . 11/12/2014 Really enjoyed your first four chapters. Update it soon please and maybe change the rating to M. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/6/2014 Can u add more/update soon? |
| black111star chapter 4 . 8/20/2014 I must be sick because I'm really enjoying this fic. I love that you kept Eric true to his personality. Most tris/Eric fits seem to turn him into a softy. I also like that this isn't a love at first sight fic. You have a lot of grammar mistakes so please get a beta and your fic will be 10 times better. |
| Love Of Blood chapter 4 . 7/30/2014 I like this idea. please keep on writing. |
