Wow that was a good story, i hope you do wright more T/P fics in the future. :)

Awwww! I love it, but what happened to make Bra so distant!

this fic was absolutely great! good job.

So far I'm really liking the description you put into the story,

and the back ground info is awesome too!

Great writing! :)

Hmm sounds interesting, I'll read on..!

Hiya LLy!

I LUV this fic you wrote! I cried on ch.6... -; It was such a touching moment! You caught the characters personalities wonderfully.

I just want you to know how honored I felt when I read this. ROCK ON!-

P.S. I dont' have an Email adress, so if you're going to make a reply, please post it on this fic or somethin'! THANX!

P.S.S TRUNKS AND PAN FOREVER!

Good story. I really liked it!

I'm very sad that there could have been 2 or 3 more chapters because I realy love this story, but I did love this chapter and you did decide to finish rather than leave us all hanging! A very great chapter, it is one the best TP stories I have read! It seems that most TP writers are moving on(aw) and it really sucks that you are too, but it's good your not leaving it completly(you gonna read them and you might write later on. ANyways it was wonderful soty and it was good to read a new chapter of a TP story, hadn't read one in awhile! Bye and I will hoping you might write another TP in the future or even adding to this or and alternate ending or something! LOVED THIS STORY!

This was a good story. Not alot of detail but just the right amount. You didn't go into every little thing, but it all made sense. Pretty original. Very Good-

Well I'll be darned. I can't believe it. I thought that you have given up on this little gem. Words can not say how much I have loved reading this fic. It ended beautifully, though I have to admit that I'm crushed that you won't be writting any more T/P fics. Crushed you hear. It seems as if all the truely great T/P writers are vanishing. I guess we all have to move on sometime. Anyway thanks for the great read, and if you ever decide to write more T/P's then e-mail me and let me know. I'll be the first one to read it. We'll miss ya.

i loved it

it was so good

you've got to carry on writing like this

GREAT clif hanger

go Pan!

loved it!

I seriuosly don't know why u don't have more reviews this story is one the best I've read! ..and I have read alot!

continue soon plz.

Ohh! i SO LOVED THAT! i HOPE U UPDATE SOON! fINALLY SHE GOT HER CHANCE!

ONE OF THE BEST FAN FICS I'VE READ, AND TRUST ME, I'VE READ A LOT!