This is my very first comment! Because my English still sucks as ever, i never have the courage to bring myself into comment something xD, but i really love Hupasu and i love your writing style, so.. finally i decided to throw myself here.
This story is well done! I love how characters are kept in their forms.
But regarding to Hubert, sometimes i have a feeling he is a little bit too harsh for Hubert. Maybe that is the difference between dub and sub? I've watched both, and Hubert's voice is deeper in dub, while original Japanese-speaking Hubert has a soft shounen voice that always talks in keigo, which doesn't sound that harsh compared to the dub one. This is also a result in difference of two diverse cultures in describing their characters by using two entirely disparate languages. And i found that in this story that Hurtbert is mostly described just like dub, which is still very good!(get slammed by my face if it wasn't this case at all (ε(#)(/) I've watched the future act entirely in japanese, maybe that is why i can't switch to the Hubert in dub xD
I like how these stories are written in full of psychological sentiments~ Keep on going!

Awwww Hu is such a romantic! I loved the meteor shower part ;n; so sweet! I have to say that Hus proposal was unexpected, but still it was sweet from him.

Finally, he accepted the fact that he was scared and offerd Pascal a proper apology. They really do remind me of my ship with Soren and Mia of Fire Emblem. Specially when Hubert says things like :"The proper course of action" is something Soren never ceases to say XD.

I wonder how Huberts mom is going to react when she meets her sons girlfriend. Or even Sophie or Asbel... Hmmm.

BTW I checked your profile and say that you have tons and tons for ToG fanfics, seems like I have some new reading material :v

Uh... such a strong ending for a chapter... I kinda saw that coming , after all Pascal is in her right to be angry at him for pushing her away.

Hubert should know by now that he shouldn't be employed embarrassed,but deep inside he is just shy. Also I understand Hubert , he wants to make her love , he really does , but Pascal isn'tthe thinking of the consequences of her acts. If they do make love there is a chance that she might get pregnant and in those times the perception of a woman having sex before marriage is a bad one.

Well, that been said... I loved the chapter and like I day before love how you write then together. They are one of my OTP.

Omg... this is I don't even know how to describe it! But is very well written , ever since I read "Aitai" I got hooked to the way you writ them.

Hubert is a respectful young man, sometimes I forget that Pascal is older than him. He almost looses control, he must have a strong will to not do anything to her whIle she is in bed with him.

The request of the President surprised me, but seeing as Hubert didn't want other people know about his relationship with Pascal , the offer of the President might help him to be more honest with the rest.

Lastly, you make them very in character.

I love your Hubert and Pascal stories! Very well done and mostly in character too. Thanks for writing them.

:') all the feelsss

Awesome story! I'm so happy there's a sequel :3
Thx to you I'm gonna spend the day reading HubertxPascal ffs and listening to Panic at the disco instead of learning for my exams xD

Wonderful story ! :)

This is a nice fic for these two. They make a surprisingly good couple. I really enjoyed reading it and look forward to the next installment.

So sweet - you write them VERY well! :)

Happy day! Gah, this was so adorable! And I have to say, I literally busted out laughing at the BZZZT part. Hahahaha, that was SO classic and perfectly done! I loved how you kept them in character, too, especially Pascal, because she's by far my fave for her humor. So I applaud you on that.

I loved this little fic. And now I have to hope you have more written somewhere, because after great stories like this, it's hard to find anything to match it from someone else. So thank you for at least writing such an amazing story!

Aaaaaaaaaaawwwwww. Sorry I'm not giving anything like constructive reviews, but it's super duper late here. Or early. Whateves. This was a sappy little number, and well done. :D

that was just...uguuu so awesome I wish I was more eloquent in finding what i want to say but uguuu, eeee

words cannot describe my feels for the way you write these two. I hope you stay inspired for a good while longer lol. :)

O MY GOSH! I loooove your writing. It makes me feel like I'm actually there watching everything (not to be creepy or anything...but your writing is just so awesomely descriptive). Also I am like a total romantic, so I just melted at all the sweetness, especially when hubert said "you are my heart. You are my everything." I swear, I must have "awwwwwwwwed" so loud. And about the fight near the end, I could see that coming. I can understand their different perspectives and I knew that it would eventually result in a fight. Hubert is all traditional with being "appropriate" and moral values, while on the otherhand, (I can relate with Pascal) I can see how she can feel "used" in a way because she feels like he is embarrassed by her (seriously, if you love the girl you better spend some time with her in public and not hide her away).

Anyway, I could go on and on about how I love your writing. I have read all of you hubert/pascal fanfics and loved them all. I seriously read them all at least ten times. Thanks sooooo much for writing these. :D

One tiny criticism, then praise to follow:

-"Okay, so, when I press this top button, all the energy that the wind turbine outside has been storing and converting into energy will start moving,"

I know it's Pascal talking, but saying "the energy it's been converting into energy" doesn't sound right. Redundant or something. Maybe you could find a better way to phrase that.

Now, the praise: This fic and its prequel were absolutely beautiful. The characters were dead-on, and I felt like this was a completely natural extension of the game's storyline. As if it was a manga sequel or something. Namco needs to hire you, like, now. :D