Nicely written but very only likes Naruto coz he's doesn't accept naruto for naruto .naruto should have played around with him and break his that sasuke learnt his then let him try hard to earn naruto's love
Overall this is bullshit

I think what happened between Sasuke and Naruto is realistic. Maybe something like this could happen.

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I freaking love your writing. You are like the o oh person who writes them how they really are originally. they're both so on point with their characters. NAruto is a sucker and kind of a fool when it comes to Sasuke, and Sasuke is a shallow douchbag(can't spell?) They're perfect. I like the happy ending even though Ithinkk Naruto's an idiot for getting back with him. Of course who am I to judge? That's so like him. He knows what he wants. I respect that. You are a fanfiction hero. For once a story that sticks to the real characters!

In just 3 chapters? Pardon me for saying this but your Sasuke was a real asshole! And just like that, he was forgiven? What about those years that Naruto was hurting? Doesn't it matter at all? It was an okay read but do make it a bit longer. Emphasize Naruto's pain and Sasuke's suffering before he was forgiven. You made it all sound so easy.

This was so sweet, I loved it! Thank you. And who in the actual fuck in the NaruSasuNaru fandom wouldn't want them together?!

Great story. I look forward to reading more from you!

It's true that Sasuke didn't deserve naruto back! But they are so cute together :3 the fanfiction was nice I really liked the way you wrote it.

you are a sadist. and I am an escape-from-reality-ist. I win. ;)

"their weeding day is the day the after tomorrow." xD crazy typo, huh? Luv this!

This story is amazing. I like how you keep both of them stay in characters. And yes! I would like to read the sequel of this story. And I'm thinking maybe in the next one you can add other characters like Sai, you know, just to make Sasuke jealous again. And maybe you can make someone trying to kill Sasuke because of his job and almost die, making Naruto deeply sad and stuff. Idk though that's just my ideas that maybe you can come up with good ones. And thanks for writing the story!

I liked the last chapter of this and it made me feel better about them reuniting because they took it slow, but yeah, I didn't really feel good about Naruto taking Sasuke back going in to the last chapter. The problem was, Sasuke broke up with Naruto for such a snobbish, senseless reason. There was no way he deserved to be with Naruto after that. It was like he was showing his true character there. Who would ever want to be with someone who looks down on people like that?

If only you had given him a legitimate reason for breaking up, like wanting to go to law school but not wanting to do the long-distance thing. Anything where we could see his perspective on why he did what he did. Even if we disagreed, if his perspective was at least reasonable... But like this, the breakup was 100% his fault, so it was very difficult to want to see a reunion of this couple.

And for my personal tastes as a reader, I really, really don't like situations where one person is entirely to blame for something because that's not how real life works. There's two sides to every story and things have a lot more shades of gray than that.

So that would have been another thing, if Naruto had also played a part in the breakup, a reunion would have been more satisfying because then you could say they both grew as people and would be a better couple now.

But that's not really what happened here. I'm not even sure Sasuke himself grew as a person in the time he spent apart from Naruto. In this case, Sasuke had a negative opinion of Naruto being a loser, and even though he missed him in all the years they were apart and realized his mistake, he didn't start thinking of taking Naruto back until after he found out how successful Naruto was. He didn't actually learn any worthwhile lessons about not being a snob, only that he'd misjudged Naruto. Would he still have wanted to take Naruto back if he'd discovered that he was a mechanic and not an architect? Would Naruto still have been "not good enough" then?

It's stuff like that which made me question a reunion. So what I want to say is, it was a well-written story, but I didn't end up feeling 100% supportive of the characters in the end. I felt better after the third chapter, but still not entirely happy with Naruto's decision at the end.

Heya c: love the story! Can you pm me the full version please?

This was an awesome story! I loved the process and plot. ( I am also a big narusasu fan so I liked this chappie, lol.) The only thing I can say for improvement is more detail. I didn't wan t it to end. Keep writing and stay awesome!

this is refreshing, seeing how they met again after breaking-up,
and even the breaking up part was sad and hurt,
thx for writing this

can't wait to part 2! _