not reading this, first chapter is unacceptable

this is kinda racist.

A decent story nice characters, the training is a bit vague and you’re leaving things soo clueless, like orientation and choice of whether she too kind not kind enough and who she dealing and how she feels about herself and boys and girls.

One thing I dislike is that she’s not growing as a character and just crying every 10 minutes

Tbh... bit too much profanity and ridiculousness in chap 1. Sort of a turnoff.

Happiness is hard. Tragedy is easy. Its just a shame to see yet another "writer" take the easy way out.

does he really think of his wife as a 'n' word?

God damn... I seldom write reviews, but here I guess i just need to.
I avoided this story for ages, just because of the title -.- I literally dislike comedy genre, but then something bad happened in my life and I was out for "hey why not read something lighhearted to calm yourself" And I got hooked to this shite, fully expecting it to be comedy. But I soon realised this story is like following a trail of honey, only to end up in front of a highly active bee-hive and remembering one is highly alergic to beestings... And then I got stung and stung and stung, till now. Ended up as an emotional wreck, swollen with injected grief and more emptiness I can handle...
But where da hell is my antiallergic, cause i really need that for the sequels.

This story is a gem, lad I read it. deservs far more attention then it's already gotten.

CU out there at the sequel. keep it up Author-sama

dude they are making you into a doll reforming you once you agreed to the name change and ageed to her as your mother and to being a girl and that you were in a comma they do have mind tricks to make you for get who you were and seal up your 30 year old man self so you fall in line to their brainwashing ways its all messed up control is made thru rules bonds of friendship family love ones and duty all wrapped in one he is doomed

rather than finding these childhood scenes sexual like those persevered minds, i find them a normal PART of childhood. also important for your character development and bonds. you shouldn’t have to explain to others your creative choices unless they’re seriously out of societal norm. children often do take baths. girls often do cuddle and shit, i know i did. i feel sad for those who criticize your wonderful work. i’m not even far into the story, yet you write so eloquently!

i dont think its T rated, i say its K

Ugh. I'm seven chapters in, haven't gotten an ounce of sleep yet (7am now), and there's still so many more chapters.

Mother fucker, I am HOOKED. Imma pass out now, but I'm srsly looking forward to reading more.

nice

part of the fun of the SI OC is the mystery of hiding the fact that one is from another world, an immediate reveal is like showing all the cards at once

the end is confusing, but the beginning and middle part of the story is great

what the fuck mom? that's pure blackmail. Gotta hate people like that