| Reviews for Lovestruck |
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insanelaughtler chapter 4 . 3/27/2013 I hope you haven't abandoned this! I really wanted to see where it was going! Please continue? |
CaciaCoon chapter 4 . 2/27/2013 Please continue. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2013 I Like this story, please update again when you can |
glorifiedDeath chapter 4 . 1/19/2013 Holly fuck I want to know what's happened to Dirk. Please let me know. |
Tonnerre chapter 4 . 10/10/2012 Daawww. Holy Hell that's cute..and angsty. More please. |
Karen chapter 4 . 9/23/2012 wowowwowowoowoww this is so good ogm |
BoneMarrowBro chapter 4 . 9/8/2012 Well written imaginative and realistic stories like this are hard to come by in even in the Homestuck Fan-base. Good work. Followin' |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/9/2012 This story is very interesting. I would like to read more if it's possible. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2012 The opening is just... WHAT? I do not understand at all. |
Homestucker chapter 4 . 7/6/2012 god this is good please continue! |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/29/2012 That last part... He's ready to take on any adventure... FUCKING CUTEST THING I HAVE EVER READ, GOG DAMN IT! |
Alice Rider chapter 3 . 5/21/2012 Darn! It was just getting good too! Well, continue! I want to see where this is going! |
Hellocloser chapter 3 . 5/19/2012 A little bit of CC: You might want to flesh out some of your scenes a little bit. Focus on the 5 senses, that can usually help you add more to a scene. Also, if you ever went back to edit some old chapters, you might want to dive a little deeper into Dirk's brain when he's thinking about making Dave uncomfortable. Other than that, this is pretty good! Your characterisation is lovely. :) I'll look forward to more! |