This was interesting,I'm starting to have perspectives on your perspectives...

I am betting the complicated a/n at the end was just to get it up to 666 words? XD Pretty good overall, you could have been a bit more descriptive, but that is just me being nitpicky. (not like I can judge, I read not write.) Good work with this.

Wow! When Shadow fell I thought he just burnt and crashed... but it makes so much sense that he would go through everything described there.

Two words: 'Brilliant' and 'Ouch'. ;)

There are no words to describe this piece. What you have written is just... incredible. Well done.