Wow... this is really good. Better than the B that you got.

I do like your update version better. (all 17 chapters so far!)

I'm so relieved you did not kill Bella's character or else I might get cranky. LOL

I really enjoyed this one. It was different than MB that Edward was closer to her age and it left you guessing as to whether or not if Bella died.

Awesome I'm glad she ended up with Edward I always love smart outside the box thinking Bella.

So Bella did live? I enjoyed this way but I like the way you have it going now Thanks.