Very well written.

This is frickin awesome

This
Is

So pERFECT OK

This does a good job of looking how he might see her progressive bloodlust increasing and leading to what it did.

This is amazing... beautiful... simply fantastic. I love it!

Even if it didn't come out the way you wanted it to, it's still a wonderful read. Thanks for posting this! -Peace Out

Nice characterization on Arya. Very nice.

Perfection. It's everything I've always known intuitively about Arya, but you managed to put it all together and stand back and look at the whole of the thing.

She's not a little lady masquerading as a feral little boy.

She's a fucking wolf masquerading as a lady.

This is who she is, ugly and terrifying and brilliant.

I like the jumpy-ness of it all. That probably isn't the best way to describe what I'm trying to say, but you know what I'm talking about, right? The short paragraphs, shifting timelines... that kind of stuff.

Oh, and I really like this song too. It makes me dance with my shoulders. Think about it, it's total shoulder-dancing in the car material.

yes i

YES.

(that's like literally all I have to say because holy shit Chloe. HOLY. SHIT.)