i have some advice for people who comment( please dont be rude its not nice to the writiter after all if you dont have something nice to say dont say it at all) I liked the story but yes do you spell check.

love the story hope there is more to come!

it was pretty good

Oh I love it! Its absoulutly magnificent!

Excellent story! Please continue this!

Wow, you aren't a very good writer are you?
Please learn how to use detail, keep the reader interested, and how to use proper grammar.
This story was not good. At all.

Reviewing yet again! Oh Stinking Obia...they kill innocent pups. well heres what i have to say to Miu...GO TO *beep* *beep* YOU LITTLE *cencored* *yet again beep*! THEN GET *beep* BY THE *cencored*! THEN AS YOU'RE SELF CRAWLS, GET *meep* BY A *cencored* ! there now go along and die. heh hem...pardon meh french...sometimes i get a little TO into it...heh anyway sorry about that. Go to *meep* Mui!
Icetail o.O

OMGGGGGGG! I LOVE Wolfs of the i havent read the 4th one(Frost). But i want to sooooo bad!My fav is the third one where they save the bear cub from the rabid wolf! heh creepyyyy... Anyways! Good job as always! you should keep going! Heh...anyway! bye and happy writing!
Icetail o.O

The story sounds like it'll be interesting and you have a very good choice of words. However, a lot of the words are spelled wrong. I suggest using a word document to type up the story then uploading it that way. Then spellcheck will fix a lot of the misspelled words.
Sorry if you don't like that I'm pointing out your misspelled words. There were just so many. DX

wow it's so like the book wolves of the beyond its great!

Amazing writing! I love it! Please make another chapter!
WolfLover4Life
"WolfLover4Life loves wolves! Did you notice?"

Amazing buddeh I wuv it hehhehh 03033333 pleaseeeee write moreeeeeeezzzzz

Awesome