Please please please come back to this story! It's so awesome and I'd love to know how it all ends!

Pobrecita

wowza. i really like this story. i have to wonder if any of the elders will hate her a little bit less once they heard that she opted for tribal law to protect the secret rather than having her almost-rapist put in jail...

wonder why he thought she smelled so good

goodness

Ahhhhh of course it ends on this note T-T. Well shoot. Maybe you’ll finish it one day? If not, this was one hell of a ride to read. Great complex story and Jan was a treat to read. I wish I could have found out what you saw playing out for her and Paul. Well for now, I can draw my own conclusion and happy ending for themgreat story! Really!

Holy crap I love reading this story! :D The Wit is real in the story narration! I have laughed so much with these insane/creative references and the development of characters and plot has been fantastic. I have binged these last 33 chapters and can’t wait to continue on! I have great expectations that I will continue to love these next! Thank you so much for writing this story and sharing.

I both like and absolutely hate Jack.

I had to stop reading this. Paul physically abused her and emotionally tormented her and you are putting them together in a relationship? Not only that when she informed Emily and Sam what happened they organised for her to tutor her tormentor. This is not okay.

Wasn't Jason twenty at the beginning of the story.

It is sick to see an adult person behaving like that towards seventeen year olds and younger. It is sick to see a woman flirt with a racist guy who hit her daughter and broke her nose,

She should be tellomg her parents. Paul is an abuser and stalker. And now she is being violated, manipulated by the community she lives in so she can be groomed for him. It's sick. They know what he did to her and they help him? As if he has a right to her person? As if her wishes and choices should be disrespected and ignored? Because she is a girl and Paul's property?

Didn't Paul go to jail after assaulting Jan?

Please tell me this isn't a story of a girl getting together with a racist, abusive guy who hit her, breaking her nose. The years of bullying would be enough to know never to get close to the guy. But the relationship between twose two will now be a relationship between a victim and an abuser. Abusers are not romantic. Let us not romanticise them.

Hope to read more soon.

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