Why the loooonnnngggg cliffhanger?

It really does suck. I always rooted for chamil and Ron. Kim just..I never really liked that pairing but the story goes where the author chooses. My first review so just gonna say I really do enjoy this story. It's the only chamil and Ron story our their so I do appreciate it :).

Now that Ron is out of the question, only the twins can unmask Kim. May be they will notice that she is no longer writing in her diary.

Duude that was pretty intense. Can't wait to see how all of this turns out for everyone especially Drakken and Dementor, I mean Ron is in a pretty bad sitch too that should play out nicely. So can't wait for the next chapter.

Well, the good news is that Camille didn't violate Kim's innocence like she did Ron's. The bad news is that now Ron is going to be a prisoner of GJ. On the bright side, Ron will be reunited with Kim, and the two will be able to work together to escape. As for Dementor's plan, I feel that he did exactly what Gemini wanted by contacting Shego, seeing as he wants her at his side. Also, I'm glad you had Ron tell Camille apart from Kim, unlike in the cartoon. I can only imagine how this will turn out.

Glad to have the opportunity to read the new chapter.
Very happy that Ron saw through Camille, but wasn't wise enough that he turned her back on her.

It will be interesting if she will be able to convince Dr. Directory that Ron is having issues and won't believe him.

All they would need to do is to have Kim and Camille answer a few questions via paper to see who get them right.

Would be cool to have Shego stop by and test Kim, she'd be another who would know the difference.

Again glad to see an update and hope there is more down the road.
This is too good of a story to not have a finish.

Thanks

Joe

Poor Ron, played and now sent off as a casualty of villainous tech...wonder if that will stick at the hole Camille's going to suggest he be placed in.

But while Dementor and Drakken may be sprung from Gemini's prison, can they withstand the retaliation to come, from either Pepe's master, or Lowardia when this comes to pass?

Ron may be the linchpin to all of this, but he's got to clear a lot of things up before then. Or GJ's going to be gunning for him, with faux-Kim in the lead.

CB73

Well next time they will probably try to knock a lorwardian up by force instead of drugs.

Gotta say very good use of the bondo ball. And also I think that Mr. B came through with some surprisingly good advice for the Ronman, while confidence murdering, still good can't wait to see how he proceeds from here. Also can't wait to see Geminis plans for Warmonga. Great job on this chapter looking forward to the next one.

Depths to Ron neither he, nor anyone else, ever realized are starting to come up around that boy. But I wonder what Camille will do with such information after she's through destroying what Gemini wants and she desires.

Gemini may believe he's in the strongest position for world domination and what he calls protection, but I think he's in for many rude interruptions as this goes further. Lowardians are nothing but persistent about conquests, and then, there's the Ron-factor...

CB73

Good establishing chapter! So Lowardia came knocking and Gemini answered. Interesting.
I wonder how this will play out. Will Ron have any role in reeling the invasion, or might he be broken by Camille?

I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

Well, I didn't expect this to be what Gemini was planning. Still, I do believe he's called down the thunder. I just hope you straighten out this thing with Kim and Ron by the end, otherwise, I'll never be able to look at K/R the same way again.

I guess I was wrong about the Director. So when is Ron going to summon the Lotus Blade and turn the enemy into confetti?

I bet the Director is Camille. I guess I'll see if I'm right in a few chapters. Great job with the story by the way. I've noticed all the little references you put in and you've made a pretty intricate plot.

Great job on this one, nothing like seeing a sociopath interact with the Tweebs. Nice bit of insight into the beginings of Gemini, just like all villans their goals always start out so noble don't they? I mean don't get me wrong he had a point about the justice system, but now that he's on the other side of the gun what's he gonna do when the loved ones of his victims want their justice? Who does he answer to when that random person that "got in his way" family wants someone to pay for their loss? It'll be interesting to see how or if he atones for his own sins.