this is great!keep up the great work! for you fan fics and youre videos!

this was so cute! i loved the plot idea and execution. well done!

Very nice. I like the twist at the end. I felt that the pace was good, and the characters were true to themselves. Lovely, just lovely!

This is adorable! I love how Cilan insisted the kiss was a dream when it wasn't 3 ADORABLE and well-written!

I love that ending so much! 3

This is so sweet! You portrayed both Cilan and Iris really well! :D

One thing that confuses me, though: At the end, it says that Cilan would have to keep up his Movie Connoisseur skills. I may have read the paragraph wrong, but I didn't really understand what his Movie Connoisseur skills have to do with this situation. :/

Other than that, great story!

Hayley

Please make it a movie i love your story i read it every night

Id like it as a movie

cute but sneeky story. '-

I love this story! it had me squealing like a little girl w

cici here, and that was my first and favorite wishfulshipping story ever! probably. ;) very cute

Amazing story! I love the way you write Iris and Cilan feelings for each other. 3 I really hope you'll write more about them.

The only thing I thought was a little odd was the fact that it sounded like she lost consciousness because she fell from the tree... it would make more sense if the reason she fell was because she was ill and then slipped because she had already started to faint...

I don't know, maybe I just misunderstood that part. Sorry. x D

Aww! This fic was so cute. I really liked it,everything seemed in character and for a minute I believed it was all a dream too-I'm happy that it wasn't! I giggled at the end. Haha naughty Dento. xP

Sweet! You totally captured their characters. Especially Cilan's Tasting Time and Iris's habit of calling someone a kid. Great job!

Great job with the story! Also, did you get my responses to your comments on my story?