Reviews for In the Devil's Teeth
Orangejiuce chapter 16 . 3/3/2019
Hi!
I've read your fics about a dozen times each and have commented several times, but I just wanted to say, please ignore the hater Tap04. I was just scrolling through the reviews and saw that user saying that Asami and Akihito were OOC or something? And the person vaguely threatened you near the end?
I have read a lot of fanfiction and known some authors who have been hurt by the cloud of negativity and hate that some people carry around with them everywhere.
I just wanted to give words of support - hoping you know that your writing is absolutely beautiful and I for one (alongside countless others) LOVE LOVE your stories of VF. I do not think this is OOC at all due to the circumstances of how this is a sensitive past that is dealt with and also the love Asami and Akihito have for each other.
This is my number one story to read if I want an Asami/Akihito fic with immense character depth, great plot, and just the phenomenal capability of making me cry, laugh, and just fall in love with those two characters all over again.
Your writing is an absolute joy to read and frankly superior to the current number 1 VF fanfic (no hate I like that specific fic as more of a chill read insted of the immersive no-stop reading I do with your fics).
Lastly, I just wanted to point out that the user who left negative comments continued to read your fic even after leaving such rude messages, which just shows that they're just one of those passionate readers who don't know how to express their feelings right. Not trying to defend him though. Just mentioning that he's leaving those kind of comments due to being strongly affected by your story - which good stories tend to always do.

Sorry for the long review xD I just couldn't NOT say anything just in case you happened to be even slightly hurt by what this user said.
I am a huge fan of your fics and I hope you know that I do read your stories again and again and again, time after time.
Thank you for your love and effort and time to this story and all the others.

Now I'm off to go read Under the Skin xDD
RyuandAki chapter 11 . 1/17/2019
I swear to God that if you ever make an anticlimactic to this fic I will personally hunt you.
#SERIOUSLY?
RyuandAki chapter 9 . 1/17/2019
containsa little angst..." bitch this isn't just "little angst" ! This is a whole different mind boggling events ! I can't move on from chapter to chapter because of the tightness of this stupid heart ! I need to read the manga again to make my heart and mind start rearranging the events in there !
RyuandAki chapter 8 . 1/17/2019
Fuck it ! This is so fucking hurt
RyuandAki chapter 4 . 1/17/2019
This is not Asami !
RyuandAki chapter 7 . 1/17/2019
I'm outrageously and surprisingly against this fic ! This is totally ooc for Asami and Akihito's part
RyuandAki chapter 5 . 1/17/2019
I'm confused at this chapter ...
RyuandAki chapter 5 . 1/17/2019
This is so sad... I'm can't stop crying... Especially I can't stop crying because while reading this I'm listening to the song "I'm too good at goodbye" by Sam Smith
RyuandAki chapter 3 . 1/17/2019
This is too hard to read but I can't stop...
RyuandAki chapter 1 . 1/17/2019
Continuation from my comment under this:

Even in the manga, mostly Asami punishes Akihito by rough sex or ordering someone to follow him around/everywhere. I just dont think Asami can do that because he knows Akihito wont forgive him even if he said sorry ha million times hahahah. I think they're relationship is toxic to the point of like a drug to be addicted of. I hope I made sense huhuhu. *peace*
RyuandAki chapter 1 . 1/17/2019
I cant somehow imagine Asami-sama hitting or inflecting any violence towards Akihitoexcept sex?. He might punish Akihito by Non-stop-rough-to-the-edges sex or sending him faraway without talking to him... that's what I would believe but hitting him (Akihito) INFRONT of his subordinates are not Asami at all.
SilwenPrince chapter 11 . 11/19/2018
(That username actually is my name and I'm too lazy to sign in.)
Feilong and Homura are absolutely fascinating foils. I've read a lot of your things but I've never reviewed any of them because I've been either ashamed I'm reading sexually explicit things, or jealous of your writing ability which is absolutely incredible. Um. This piece is one of my favorites, hands down. It's incredible.
The dialog is real, it punches when it needs to, makes me laugh, or get pissed at the characters. I love it.
I'm royally pissed at Asami even though I can see where he's coming from. I'm so pissed at him.
Yet during this chapter, all I've been chanting is "come to me, I'll hide you and we can all have tea together and it'll be great and terrifying."
Feilong is downright incredible and I'm in love with the way you portray him. (I ship the three of them, Feilong Akihito Asami.) And you should write more things with Feilong. You really really should. Even five years later, you should. Skies above, your writing is amazing. It really really really really really is a delight to read. So please write more and write more with Feilong.
tweetynumair chapter 16 . 2/15/2018
Amazing story! Got to admit some of it was hard to read, Akihito was hurting so much, but glad they ended up stronger together.
Lily chapter 15 . 2/6/2018
So beautiful QvQ I would have loved a wedding and my goodness me do I want an update for Viewfinder already! I miss them so much QAQ thank u for another great story TTvTT
Lily chapter 14 . 2/6/2018
w-w-W-WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW ASFJL;/ &)~%#*! *dead* I cant express myself on this chapter
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