596 words of greatness.

Who knows if you'll even get this review seeing as how long it's been since you posted this, but this is fantastic. That part at the end where Jim drew a tattoo on his arm was amazing. Utter genius.

Was the dragonfly part meant to be the darning needle dragonfly?

Anyway, this was, and I'm being completely honest here, one of the best one shots I've ever read.

Bravo.