Really enjoying the story. More to come? (Fingers crossed)

We have lots of Halo romance stories- the common commotion is John-Cortana pairing. I've had enough (not being so jelly over the aformentioned romance story pair). I like this story, or should I say, love it? The writing is so good, but there are few grammatical errors and instant change of events that you might want to fix. All in all, this is a perfect romance fanfic. Bravo. I am waiting for the next chapters.

Great story, love these two together. Don't stop writing!

Aww, how sweet :)

Huh, short. But good. Anyways update soon and keep up the good work.

Great story but Honestly Mjolnir gear doesn't crack so easily if his visor would be so weak he would alreadt be dead you speak ABOUT mjolnir like it's a simple gear Mjolnir is one of the most advanced strongest and unbreakable gears -TDM

Thank you for your service to the country, also I want to join the U.S. Marines after high school.

Glad you are back and writing once more. Been wondering where you were!
xD

I find it funny everyone says Kelly and John not Linda and John even though there was hints of affection toward each other.
I agree that it's Linda and John

What happens next
It was getting good
I can't wait until u make another chapter
This story so far is amazing
Thanks for making chief love someone

MORE! I MUST HAVE MORE!

nice chapter but strictly speaking from the canon of halo lore John doesn't require technicians to get in and out of his armor as demonstrated in the halo novel The Flood

nice chapter i loved the tension building up and the way it ended. made me laugh

This is great, i hope you will continue this soon :D

U should make more